ReviewRaptor's manga / #NOT INTERESTED(238)

This is a good example of one of those webtoons based on the concept of drama for drama's sake just so the story can be longer. And why the hell do all these webtoons skip from the moment the person gets pregnant up to the point where the kid is several years old!? WTF?? You basically cut of a very crucial, character building and empathy building part just to get on with the story. It's annoying and makes things boring tbh. And more often than not: it makes your work predictable as can be if you use that 'mEcHaNiC' while writing. This is a halfassed story tbh. It's a plot we've seen multiple times, does nothing new and the few things that are of substance are boring and lackluster. It's a page-flicker at best but not even that is enjoyable. Not recommended, at all. Better look for another story that uses this exact plot and I'm sure you can indeed find a good one that's somewhat enjoyable to read.

Shitty in every possible way. The plot is horseshit, the characters are either disgusting or dumb as fuck and even the art seems lackluster and halfassed when it comes to what they might want you to call 'colouring'. Spare yourself the wasted time and look for something else. Except of course if you're one of those sick fucks that gets off by actual rape and dumb as shit characters that magically fall in love with their rapist. Then go ahead and read this. I would burn this if I had bought this as a comic. It's pure garbage.

Great...ANOTHER one of these shitty Omegaverse that drive the narrative of 'omegas only exist to be fucked by alphas and give birth to more alphas'. And this one even has it as the MAIN point of the plot. FFS, I really wish this genre would just die at this point. Nobody needs these rape-glorification stories and I'm honestly sick seeing so many people ride this rape train. Waste of time, story telling is absurdly jump-cutty and overall bad. Art isn't much either and cannot save it in any way. Not worth it, moving on.

Boring, as all hell. Both the formatting/layout of the pages and the storytelling make this SO unbelievably slow paced. Many things feel rushed too tho, others obnoxiously shoe-horned. It's just a mess. It's generally a story that's terribly predictable but tries to throw bits and pieces in to make it 'hip, quirky and unique!', like a teenager on Tumblr that copies others and hence...isn't special in the slightest but just a weirdo. You and I have seen this plot a million times, but most of the time it has been executed better. it's like the author cherry picked popular plot themes and threw them all together, trying desperately to make it work as a somewhat coherrent story but...it's not really working. It's tedious and had me predict all happenings' outcomes as soon as they started. Which is just plain bad writing. For kids this might be a really good read, someone who doesn't know what all these cliche plot points will ultimately lead to and for someone that doesn't know what good writing is...but for anyone else? Spare yourself the pain. Not recommended, moving on.

This is another one of those stories in which you can tell the author has no idea what life is like. If you don't know how people AROUND amnesia patients would naturally act...don't write an amnesia plot. Please. It's so frustrating. Not only is the main character dumb but all others are dumb as well and noone behaves naturally. Instead of TALKING they all go "lol, figure this shit out yourself, bye!" and then get prissy when she cannot react/act in the way she previously would/should have. It's like reading a story written by a 12 year old that imagines what the rough concept of amnesia and time skips would be like in their ultimate sob-story self-insert tale. Obnoxious to read and even more obnoxious to imagine yourself as any character whithin this story. Spare yourself the tedious read. The concept was good but the execution is unbearable.