ReviewRaptor's manga / #NOT INTERESTED(221)

It's like someone made a comic based on a re-telling of a re-telling of a rough plot description...it's hardly a cohesive story and hence really isn't fun or interesting when reading. The plot might be interesting, but the execution butchered it to the point of me really growing disinterested by the first few chapters. The male characters are nice to look at but that's about the only positive thing I can say. Oh, and the male lead doesn't seem like a yandere. i don't think the author knows what that character type even is to be honest...

This would have been good if it wasn't yet another one of those webtoons that rushes the plot along to get to the part that the artist deemed 'most important'. Can people stop butchering plots like this please? I doubt it's the same for the novel, if there is one, and it's quite disrespectful to the story in it's true form...

This isn't a cohesive, fluent slowing story, it's more like one of those 4-koma comics or other comics on the web with each page ('chapter') really just being a random happening that's disconnected from nearly everything else. Not gonna waste my time on that, sorry.

The idea was nice but...the execution falls short on all ends. It comes across as VERY messy and somewhat halfassed here and there. It's too jump cut-y one time and the other it just drags on too long with something. It's another one of those stories that feel like a comic based off of a re-telling by someone who read a story some time ago or glanced over a script. And I'm honestly starting to get tired of seeing this be done. It's so damn easy to avoid...please, just DON'T make a comic if you can't manage cohesive or fluent story telling. It just makes it a chore to read unless you maybe don't know what good or bad writing is (which I know this website is full of, but that's no excuse). Hard pass due to the obnoxious flow (if you wanna call it that) and just messy execution. Also, very predictable and the plot is minimal as is so we can already tell there'll be lots of arcs with needles drama just so the story can stretch on and on...