The Essence Of A Perfect Marriage
Okay, at chapter 4 I'm really questioning whether it's the translation or really just the writing that makes this feel so bumpy, jumpy and a bit too rushed. The introduction of the marriage partner was lackluster either way, but I'm starting to wonder if this'll be worth bothering with any further... Conclusion: At chapter 7 I can confidentally say it's both. the translations suck AND the writing. Waste of time, really.
Runway Hit
This feels like there's pannels, pages or even whole chapters missing. WTF? One chapter they are both zero interested in each other, next the guy gets randomly horny at the other and then they suddenly fuck with both being interested/wanting it like they had just a falling-in-love arc successfully finished? The writing and pacing is bad. It honestly feels like someone had specific scenes in mind and just somewhat managed to string them together so they can slap a story/comic title onto it. But there's really more to writing than that...sadly this work doesn't manage to do that. Not gonna waste my time after flying up to ch 14. It's not coherrent enough to bother reading for the story and the sex scenes not detailed enough to skip through it for smut-only purposes. Hard pass.
Oh! My Maid Master
Had hopes for this but the first chapter is already showing a lackluster and mediocre execution, at best I mean. It has a really 14-years-old-tumblr-author feel to it based on how the dialogue is written and how characters reason and react. It's not cringey but just...really making me loose all interest in anything that's happening o9r could be happening. (Doesn't seem to be the translations fault, btw.) It's fine to leave out some stuff but if you magically teleport a character and have her jump into a sentence that warrants a question/reaction from the bad guys being shown first then...it really feels like you have no fucking idea what you're doing. All in all it feels like a cliche clusterfuck of shoujo story parts being taken by a kid and squiched into something that's supposed to be a story. All while the pacing is so fast and happenings so abrupt that you're just sitting there all like: WTF!? oh, okay...? What? How? erhm...yeah. It's not interesting, it's not enjoyable and the art can't safe it either. Hard pass. (And probably the first to accomplish that in one chapter, I believe.)
Cloudburst
Try To Tame Me, Secretary Cha