I don't think the translation is to blame here but: This story feels rushed, lackluster, uses inappropriate times for comedy/chibi moments in a VERY unfitting way, the art is meh and the overall storyline is giving vibes of 'author had 5 minutes to come up with this'.
I have read 8 chapters and no character is interesting, their emotions are shallow and badly portrayed, the story drags yet rushes at the same time and all in all there is just nothing that seems interesting.
The random, almost magic-like sci-fi car bs really wasn't well thought out either. The author could have at least MENTIONED that this world is hard-progressed in terms of that stuff instead of it just being ONE single random thing plopping up.
There is too much negative points to this comic that the only positive aspect that remains is likely: This is probably decent jerk-off material for some chapters.
But I will NOT be bothered to read further to see if that holds true. The art is not interesting enough for me to care to see smut of it.
Not recommended. This is likely only a story for people who care ZERO about good writing in every aspect. I really cannot explain it otherwise.
Overclock