ReviewRaptor's manga / #LACKING(413)

First chapter is already a mess. The seme is hinted to be a dark, twisted guy (somewhat) and then we cut right back to peaceful and friendly athmosphere and ignore those hints. Which feels off and somehow as if the author didn't think things through or jumbled up multiple stories into one. Many scenes feel just rushed and some make little to no sense. I'm not sure this is worth a read. For those who like the first chapter, maybe it is, but I prefer things that flow smoothly and don't feel chaotic and random. 2/10