ReviewRaptor's manga / #Interesting(483)

Alt title ideas: - Kinky Venom Cousin Politely Rapes/Breeds Crash-Landing Soldier Jokes aside tho, this is decent enough, even if the logic/dialogue and character behavior of the MC is absolute ass. The translations being not the greatest at times is also not helping but it doesn't change the weirdness of some parts in the 'story'. XD I expected dark bs with that kinda thumbnail. It's smut, which is essentially porn in comic form. And as such, this does a great job. So, don't try to find realism in this or complain about it and don't expect much of a story since sex is the only focus here. The MC is acting like any hentai protagonist and doesn't really act like a real person being surprise-bonked by a bellybutton-dicked 6-armed alien twice his height. Which makes the rape stomache-able and can function well as a self-insert for people with a kink ti get suprise-bonked or being done by a monster/beast of humanoid kind. The art is great, the character design decent and the base story good. It would have worked as a real story too tbh. I'd have liked that more than just fap material, but oh well. XD Would recommend for horny people with a rape and/or self-insert kink, but not for readers who look for something realistic or a real story.

I hope nobody who thinks like the MC ever gets isekai'd. Bitch, you wanna speed-run to your own execution THAT badly? XD Seriously, at least think for half a second if or if not your behavior would have bad consequences. We are talking medieval-type settings for these, usually, so getting your ass thrown in jail, executed or being called a witch that now needs to be off'd would happen faster than you could realize. DO. NOT. DO. THIS. I think the idea is nice, and I am certain I have seen something similar before, but her 'reckless abandon' is cranked to 11 and makes it really dumb. The art is decent but cannot carry. It lacks that certain factor to bring across emotions well in specific ways, as someone mentioned before me. And I think the factor is that there is not enough difference shown in the entire face from one emotion to another. And that makes it a bit bland overall. Pair that with the silly writing/dumb character logic and it's not really a good outcome. Good for first timers maybe, but not for seasoned readers who are looking for grand writing and impressive art to immerse themselves in. Decent but not good. Tho If you can view it as a comedy piece (which then again, the comedy is not nearly strong enough for), then I guess it can work as a light read regardless. I would say; give it a try. Maybe you can enjoy it as a read inbetween serious comics. :)

EDIT: Dropping this at ch 78. It got even more time skippish and everything is just rushed and focusing on random sudden things without finishing one aspect from before and it keeps adding thos OBNOXIOUS timeline skips even in the middle of conversations. This is just shitty writing now. It was alright till the first 'arc' final, which wasn't even an arc, it was just random tbh. I hope the novel is better because this comic is honestly very badly done. Wouldn't recommend other than looking at art and even that is lower mid-tier tbh. :/ I now reached chapter 75 and I really have to ask: Is the romance part in the original source ALSO this badly done as in the comic? Their relationship went from failed flirting attempts or just badly portrayed emotions to 'suddenly Imma confess and we both have bad reactions to it all'. This felt WAY out of order, too random and confusing to see unfold all of a sudden. If at least a few chapters beforehand she was constantly reminding us that she had deep emotions, then sure, but there was barely anything at all in those 75 chapters. I think you can count them on one hand even. And I mean where the emotions actually got portrayed well and visually and per context of the situation made a clear step forward in the romance aspect of things. Is the novel the same? Is there just as much of a lack of emotions being conveyed in their romance scenes? Because if not then I really have to wonder what the comic creators were doing. They put so much effort into literally every other little fart that's going on, but the basically second-place focus (the romance) isn't being done even mid-tier well. It's quite the disappointment considering the writing otherwise seems to be decent or great even. So this feels really strange to me. As if the author (novel OR comic, I dunno) just didn't give a shit about the romance part being portrayed well or at all even. The romance up to this point is SO badly done in the comic, it's as if it was shoehorned in so it's not only a slice of life/political drama story. Which I could totally see being a thing tbh, it has the plot for it anyway.

I'mma say it as it is; this is a hundred times better than Omegaverse could ever hope to be. (▰˘◡˘▰) It's amazing people drool so much over Omegaverse when you can clearly use the basics and create something that doesn't have rape at every second corner (as well as just being mental from the getgo and never adressing the well being of the Omega, mentally) and excuses behavior by 'thats how society works now'. The writing of this is SO much better than a felt 98% of Omegaverse out there. Actions are not excused by 'lol pheromones make horny, my bad, teehee. the law says its okay as does society (except omegas of course, because those are vermin that are just used despite them having great value)'. Instead, things are given rhyme and reason, each individual given inner and outer turmoil and monologue to clearly establish this is something serious and hard to go through but it can also be something sweet and purely smutty (but in a positive way). Something the VAST majority of Omegaverse simply glosses over shittily or entirely ignores because it's just mindless smut (which means; fucking is the focus, just like in porn). Let alone those that somehow pretend being scared and disgusted can be magically forgotten by the uke turning into an ahega-Ho in the next panel because his nips got twisted once (hentai bs logic). I would honestly replace all Omegaverse stories with this Theriomorphosis plotline. It would be an upgrade on all fronts. XD