ReviewRaptor's manga / #Hot Uke(371)

The only thing I do not like is that MC is simply NOT behaving correctly with his brother. I get wanting to be a friendly little family character, but he got sold, wtf are you just letting him back in your life for? Especially without telling him off, slapping him as he needs to be or really beating his ass. The brother is absolute trash but did not have a redemption moment and is just let back into MC's life without anything. That does NOT sit well with me, it isn't right in any form and it's really the only negative point this story has. Besides being too damn short, but I can deal with that. XD Yeah, some points deduction for that part but otherwise this story is LOVELY. <3

I really adore how realistic this was held, no unneded drama or dramatic behavior and so much wholesomeness and sweetness and cuteness. It's just so adorable! <3 This author does a good job bringing across moods and emotions I gotta say. And the expressions are very well done too. I'll have to read more of this author's works, hopefully they'll be just as grand. :) I think this would be a great first read for people switching from shounen-ai works to yaoi. The romance and communication is the focus and sexual content is just the cherry ontop of the happy ending chapters. The sexual scenes are short but not too short and they skip just the right amount of things every now and then when it does finally happen. The only unpleasant thing in this was the ex-girlfriend of the MC. Who was a collossal cunt. I loathe people who think only girls are allowed to be shy, inexperienced and awkward about relationship things. MC would have wasted his precious innocence on that rat. Good thing he didn't. Kindly go fuck thyself~. (づ￣ ³￣)づ

I really adore this author! Such an amazing sense for writing but also throwing us lots of impressive smut scenes, giving us interesting storylines, personalities for characters and much more. Definitely going onto my list for fav authors. :)

First things first: This is smut (it's tagged as ecchi for some reason). Smut is essentially only about fucking and portraying it as much as possible. And as per usual for this genre; there is only minimal story to this. XD Not your thing? Then better look for something else to read. The art is above average based on my standards. It cannot carry but it doesn't have to since the sex scenes are essentially doing that. There are very great panels tho, especially the poses are done very well and in a creative way instead of sticking to basics. There is a mild amount of story, but not much tbh. Works to make it a coherrent story instead of just a collection of porking moments. The story is interesting at it's core, but didn't get integrated enough to make this more than just smut. There IS comedy, but really not enough to warrant the tag tbh. Romance is certainly there but I think it wasn't done well as they jump from one moment to another suddenly being in love, whereas we have really only seen the seme develope feelings for a TINY moment (kinda like love at first sight, but it's only briefly mention). The MC literally goes from 'nah' to 'omg of course I love you!'. Without literally anything indicating the change, even it being in the same exact chapter while all that happened was irrelevant talking and fucking. X'D I think this is very good wank material since there is so much detailed smut and it's even done with a romantic storyline, but it doesn't work as a regular read for someone who might be interested in an actual story being there. Personally I am not a fan of the uke's really weird and ugly looking random drooling (it could have been drawn much better tbh), it even randomly vanishes or appears from one moment to another, which is really weird. But oh well. I think this would have been an exceptional story if the author had put equal effort into the storyline of romance and living, interacting with one another and working and so on instead of just focusing on smut. But it is great as a smut work, that's for sure! I'd recommend this to people looking for fap material but not for those looking for an actual story. Might be a bit much for newcomers so I'd say mid to experienced readers could like this if they are looking for something light and simple. :) It ultimately depends on each person's taste. So give it a try. ^^