ReviewRaptor's manga / #Hot Seme(409)

I really adore how realistic this was held, no unneded drama or dramatic behavior and so much wholesomeness and sweetness and cuteness. It's just so adorable! <3 This author does a good job bringing across moods and emotions I gotta say. And the expressions are very well done too. I'll have to read more of this author's works, hopefully they'll be just as grand. :) I think this would be a great first read for people switching from shounen-ai works to yaoi. The romance and communication is the focus and sexual content is just the cherry ontop of the happy ending chapters. The sexual scenes are short but not too short and they skip just the right amount of things every now and then when it does finally happen. The only unpleasant thing in this was the ex-girlfriend of the MC. Who was a collossal cunt. I loathe people who think only girls are allowed to be shy, inexperienced and awkward about relationship things. MC would have wasted his precious innocence on that rat. Good thing he didn't. Kindly go fuck thyself~. (づ￣ ³￣)づ

I really adore this author! Such an amazing sense for writing but also throwing us lots of impressive smut scenes, giving us interesting storylines, personalities for characters and much more. Definitely going onto my list for fav authors. :)

DETAILED REVIEW WITH BASIC SPOILERS. Okay, so first off: Do not go into this for anything but smut or comedy, this is not a story to take seriously and critique the character's behavior because this does not attempt to be anything else but porn in comic form. You have been warned. XD If you want a sweet and loving seme, go look elsewhere. Because he DOES have his moments but he still holds true to who he is in the beginning of their relationship (which is literally all this comic shows; the start of it all.) Now, as mentioned comedy and smut is the focus here and they did that VERY well tbh. The seme is a ruthless mafia member, so his behavior doesn't randomly become cliche romantic, which is not to everybody's liking but it DOES hold true to his character. Because a ruthless mafia killer will NOT, realistically speaking, turn into a blushy sweet romantic as soon as he meets his potential lover. This is something the author did quite well but again; it will not be everybody's cup of tea. His behavior is questionable at least but for who he is it is perfect for his character and gladly the MC didn't randomly turn into a cocksleeve but he actually got into it. This COULD have been done better and with more care, but I think it is decent for what it is despite not being everybody's favourite route in a story. The MC himself is ABSOLUTELY adorable and I find his backstory and personality really great. It makes him feel realistic but at the same time like a typical 'this story will not be a serious and realistic one' kinda vibe. Weird as that might sound. It's a good mishmash. The art is good, but not great in some areas. Anatomy issues here and there are found but it's nothing too major. I wish the character design of the MC was a bit more detailed? Refined? Special? He looks awfully basic tbh. But he DOES make up for it with the comedy chibi art and his cute behavior. The character design of the seme is really great tbh. I like finally seeing a character that doesn't look well-rested and perfect but instead shows his stress and age in his facial details. Again, the storyline might not be everybody's thing but I think the author did well to make it clear this is not something to get emotionally invested in but instead just view it as a king-based reading material to get horny about and laugh at the funny moments and art. Anyone who cannot handle reading things this way should really NOT read this. It's certainly for a more mature audience, not just because of the smut and murder aspect in one moment but because of the overall tone and story needing someone to be capable of removing themselves from what is going on in this piece of fiction that is clearly only aimed at people liking to self-insert as the MC. Which IS a kink of people in sexual fantasies, as much as many people on here like to forget. (￣∇￣") I would certainly recommend this to more mature readers, not age-wise but in terms of mentality. The comedy is great tho it could even be more and carry this story for a hundred chapters together with the base storyline this has (shame it wasn't used for something longer, it would have been amazing for sure!). 8 outta 10, tho bordering a 9 for some people for sure because even if I do not like the forceful aspect of the smut, it was done well enough to actually not be something I minded too much in certain ways if we view it as a self-insert or kink fantasy that can be applied perfectly to oneself. It DOES depend on the person reading tho, no doubt.

First things first: This is smut (it's tagged as ecchi for some reason). Smut is essentially only about fucking and portraying it as much as possible. And as per usual for this genre; there is only minimal story to this. XD Not your thing? Then better look for something else to read. The art is above average based on my standards. It cannot carry but it doesn't have to since the sex scenes are essentially doing that. There are very great panels tho, especially the poses are done very well and in a creative way instead of sticking to basics. There is a mild amount of story, but not much tbh. Works to make it a coherrent story instead of just a collection of porking moments. The story is interesting at it's core, but didn't get integrated enough to make this more than just smut. There IS comedy, but really not enough to warrant the tag tbh. Romance is certainly there but I think it wasn't done well as they jump from one moment to another suddenly being in love, whereas we have really only seen the seme develope feelings for a TINY moment (kinda like love at first sight, but it's only briefly mention). The MC literally goes from 'nah' to 'omg of course I love you!'. Without literally anything indicating the change, even it being in the same exact chapter while all that happened was irrelevant talking and fucking. X'D I think this is very good wank material since there is so much detailed smut and it's even done with a romantic storyline, but it doesn't work as a regular read for someone who might be interested in an actual story being there. Personally I am not a fan of the uke's really weird and ugly looking random drooling (it could have been drawn much better tbh), it even randomly vanishes or appears from one moment to another, which is really weird. But oh well. I think this would have been an exceptional story if the author had put equal effort into the storyline of romance and living, interacting with one another and working and so on instead of just focusing on smut. But it is great as a smut work, that's for sure! I'd recommend this to people looking for fap material but not for those looking for an actual story. Might be a bit much for newcomers so I'd say mid to experienced readers could like this if they are looking for something light and simple. :) It ultimately depends on each person's taste. So give it a try. ^^