Wow, just wow.
This felt like some fucked up, far-from-reality fetish fuckfest that a 14 year old tumblr user wrote. The little story that is there is butchered and hardly made into a cohesive story, it's choppy and jump-cuttish as all hell and even makes you think that entire chapters are missing.
Some things are mentioned but not explained, others are just yeeted into your face and you have to accept them then and there, because around the next corner is another pile of shit waiting to be flung into your face.
This is really just a fetish, self-insert I'm sure. Because even IF you are into these kinda forceful relationship dynamics...you cannot enjoy them because the author made zero effort to make ANY character likable or understandable in any way. They hardly have a personality and what they do have is trash and remains so throughout.
This story, if you wanna call it that, throws happenings at you without stringing them together properly, all so (seemingly to me anyway) that the next cringey fuck scene can start. This is trash. And the type i seldom see on here with this level of average, early 2000-type of artworks.
It's not worth reading. Spare yourself the waste of time. Not even as wanking material, mind you. There is nothing of worth to be found here from start to finish.
Geinoukai Ura OL - Gyoumu Meirei Karada Settai