ReviewRaptor's manga / #HORSESHIT(2)

NOPE, fuck this. If you fuck off, you can stay fucked off please. I really hate these types of stories. Allowing the bastard to weasel himself back into the relationship with whatever shitty reason. No, absolutely hate it. Hidemasa is best boy and he would have deserved a good ending. But fuck this.

Sorry, but if you want to turn a script into a story the basic things to follow is: DON'T MAKE THE DRAMATIC STARTING POINT THE FUCKING DESCRIPTION AND THEN START THE COMIC FROM THE END OF SAID DESCRIPTION. Can you people at least TRY to make a cohesive story?? Because it sure as hell doesn't feel like it. I mean, you were so incredibly lazy to skip the introduction (that you put in writing into the summary only, not even a text-only page with fancy frames and some lackluster pictures in the back...as is the NORM for anyone that wants to rush past certain points at the start of a story)...nah, you fully on went the route of "I cannot be fucking bothered to put important information into THE COMIC ITSELF, but rather just scribble it as a description and make people feel like they started reading in the middle and/or some chapters are missing. :3". If you don't want to put in effort...just don't do it at all. It wasn't THAT much work you had to put in and it was important too. If you're lazy at the start, it's plain to see you'll cut corners at every chance you get and hence make the experience (for the reader) at very best mediocre or absolutely bad because it doesn't feel like a cohesive, flowing story. The baseplot is interesting, but given how much of a throw-off the bad writing practices are I'm not gonna bother with this. I've read enough stories to simply know how obnoxious this corner-cutting will get, so no, not gonna waste any time on lackluster works and instead will look for ones with effort put into them. Not recommended, on any front tbh.