ReviewRaptor's manga / #Great Writing(14)

Thank you for updating this great story! :D I really adore this story since it is a good casual read, suited for beginners and more experienced readers alike, yet isn't too shoujo-cliche to make it annoying. I enjoy the female lead's personality since she's not just weak for weakness sake but because she has troubles that made her give up and accept her fate. And I enjoy the male lead because he's such a green flag, handsome and kind and isn't turned into a villain for the female just to cause drama (them misunderstanding a perfectly misunderstandable situation and the drama coming from that is SO well done by the author, it feels realistic and fitting). The story is simple yet not boring since it changes things up a bit but keeps a realistic focus in things, portrays emotions and reasons well and doesn't shoe-horn the initial misunderstanding like a good 99% of all other comics of this kind. XD Something we don't see often with these plots. So I adore this. I would say this is the perfect recommendation for newcomers, especially since it will give a GOOD standard for these kinda stories (too many people are used to bad writing with these plots, which I find concerning :'D). Definitely recommended, so far anyway. I am not sure if the writing will keep being so good but I hope it will be. Again, thanks for updating this! <3

I really adore how realistic this was held, no unneded drama or dramatic behavior and so much wholesomeness and sweetness and cuteness. It's just so adorable! <3 This author does a good job bringing across moods and emotions I gotta say. And the expressions are very well done too. I'll have to read more of this author's works, hopefully they'll be just as grand. :) I think this would be a great first read for people switching from shounen-ai works to yaoi. The romance and communication is the focus and sexual content is just the cherry ontop of the happy ending chapters. The sexual scenes are short but not too short and they skip just the right amount of things every now and then when it does finally happen. The only unpleasant thing in this was the ex-girlfriend of the MC. Who was a collossal cunt. I loathe people who think only girls are allowed to be shy, inexperienced and awkward about relationship things. MC would have wasted his precious innocence on that rat. Good thing he didn't. Kindly go fuck thyself~. (づ￣ ³￣)づ

I really adore this author! Such an amazing sense for writing but also throwing us lots of impressive smut scenes, giving us interesting storylines, personalities for characters and much more. Definitely going onto my list for fav authors. :)

I'mma say it as it is; this is a hundred times better than Omegaverse could ever hope to be. (▰˘◡˘▰) It's amazing people drool so much over Omegaverse when you can clearly use the basics and create something that doesn't have rape at every second corner (as well as just being mental from the getgo and never adressing the well being of the Omega, mentally) and excuses behavior by 'thats how society works now'. The writing of this is SO much better than a felt 98% of Omegaverse out there. Actions are not excused by 'lol pheromones make horny, my bad, teehee. the law says its okay as does society (except omegas of course, because those are vermin that are just used despite them having great value)'. Instead, things are given rhyme and reason, each individual given inner and outer turmoil and monologue to clearly establish this is something serious and hard to go through but it can also be something sweet and purely smutty (but in a positive way). Something the VAST majority of Omegaverse simply glosses over shittily or entirely ignores because it's just mindless smut (which means; fucking is the focus, just like in porn). Let alone those that somehow pretend being scared and disgusted can be magically forgotten by the uke turning into an ahega-Ho in the next panel because his nips got twisted once (hentai bs logic). I would honestly replace all Omegaverse stories with this Theriomorphosis plotline. It would be an upgrade on all fronts. XD

So many chapters and I have yet to see Deku's dad. SHOW US THE MAN, COME ON! XD Jokes aside tho; I think the ending(s, for multiple characters) is okay. Not what I would have wished for, because even if a person was bad, if they had a really shit life that made them that way, I tend to really wish for them to have a happy ending and recieving what they truly needed/wanted to make them happy. But I know realistically speaking that's not always, if at all, possible. So this ending (for Tomura) I think works alright. Same for Touya. I wish he could go on for a long time and be okay, but after what happened it is most realistic he's not gonna get his happy ending, just a glimpse of it as we saw. I like and dislike some other things, but nothing enough to have a strong opinion. It was a decent ending for a grand story that I'll surely enjoy for years to re-read/re-watch. And anything that's not satisfying I can daydream away or read fanfictions of. or write my own! :D It worked for the shitfest that was the Bleach ending, so it will very well work for just minor 'meh' moments in this story too. I am VERY excited about what this author will create next. Hopefully the creativity hasn't run dry and we get to see another impressive world and storyline. <3

Okay, I DO see alot of very bothersome patchy and jumpy decisions in depicting some events and some not and the story would only benefit and be perfect by including more details, but as it is it's still a great read. There are moments I think it was a bad choice to skip some emotional moments (the family dinner for example) or not go into detail more, but overall it's very easy to get emotional when reading. Which actually, for the first time in years, makes me wish this was based on a novel so I could look online where I can purchase the original novel. XD Great art. Great characters and realistic portrayal of problems SO many stories just love to ignore or shrug off. Just impressive in terms of storyboard I gotta say. And it's been years since I came across a story I can say that about. Such a shame this isn't finished, I was really hooked. But it was too nice even at the start to just lay it down and wait. (￣∇￣")

I'll make it short by saying; the writing is great, the art amazing, the amount of smut just right, the story perfect (especially the ending) despite it being such a rollercoaster and the characters are all likable in their own way. And I really adore the fact the author put in effort into depicting a mental illness in a realistic way yet making it work in this piece of fiction and giving it some additional factors that make it enhance the story and reading experience. Well done! DEFINITELY worth reading. It may not start off with either of the 'two semes' being likable, but they really grew on my as time went on and as their behavior got explained. Still waiting for an extra chapter tho in which our MC beats the shit outta seme's father tho. THAT would make this absolutely perfect. Or at least gimme a non-canon panel. That would be enough for me already. <3 Definitely a great read for those that appreciate good writing for mature audiences and don't just look for jackoff material with a silly, idealized story that borders fantasy. Also, a good read for people who appreciate realistic depictions of mental illness. Give it a try and let it simmer before you drop it in case the two love interests are not your thing. Even just the basic storyline is interesting and well written enough to read till the end.