Why does this first chapter feeling like it's from the middle of a story instead of a beginning, as it should be?
Kinda annoying tbh, because you feel like you missed alot of story and just randomly got thrown into it.
I don't feel this is a translation issue either, so I'm not sure if the writing is the problem or not. Hard to say.
The idea is good, but the execution lacking.
It's not a bad read (as far as the first chapter goes) but it's not good either because it feels like major story parts were skipped and it rushes along to get to the fucking part as quickly as possible.
Salvation of the Moon