ReviewRaptor's manga / #GORGEOUS Character(s)(654)

I really adore how realistic this was held, no unneded drama or dramatic behavior and so much wholesomeness and sweetness and cuteness. It's just so adorable! <3 This author does a good job bringing across moods and emotions I gotta say. And the expressions are very well done too. I'll have to read more of this author's works, hopefully they'll be just as grand. :) I think this would be a great first read for people switching from shounen-ai works to yaoi. The romance and communication is the focus and sexual content is just the cherry ontop of the happy ending chapters. The sexual scenes are short but not too short and they skip just the right amount of things every now and then when it does finally happen. The only unpleasant thing in this was the ex-girlfriend of the MC. Who was a collossal cunt. I loathe people who think only girls are allowed to be shy, inexperienced and awkward about relationship things. MC would have wasted his precious innocence on that rat. Good thing he didn't. Kindly go fuck thyself~. (づ￣ ³￣)づ

Critique ahead, beware. They are just purely comedic. In every way. And that is what you need to keep in mind when reading this; it's NOT serious, it's NOT that deep and does not wanna be, so do yourself a favour and read it as a comedy-smut comic instead of trying to criticize their behavior or reasoning. It's your own fault if you take this serious past the first chapter, really. XD The writing is decent but simple, since it IS just porn with plot (aka smut). This, again, makes it clear this should not be taken serious or have anyone critique character behavior, smut is focused on sex, not realism. Anything goes to achieve the bonking. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ This really is a more simple comic which really should be read by people who can manage to just laugh something off/ignore something the same as the character it is happening to, not getting emotionally invested in literally anything even if the mood isn't for it (however the fuck you manage to do THAT with an absurd comedy-porn setting like this, that's magic really, so please refrain from casting your spells!). Take it as a light read for comedy and sex scenes and you're good. The characters are more comedy-oriented than realistic but I do believe their behavior is plenty realistic in certain ways if you consider people like each of them DO infact exist irl, althought not so commonly. But it might not be everybody's cup of tea that there are actual people who, after being sex workers, are capable of shrugging of creepy stalker rapist incidents. Again, this is possible irl but this comic made no big deal out of it as it would simply NOT fit the entire character that was established and the general mood. (Author could have left it out tbh, maybe just making the creep undress him forcefully and it could have resulted in the exact same situation.) The art is decent but it's nothing special. The funny expressions are great tho! There is effort put into the sexual scenes but not in a high level, mid-tier I'd say. The artstyle is not unpleasant but not beautiful either, so if the comedy or romance cannot keep you, the art probably will not either. It's a taste-based thing. I would recommend this to anyone that wants a laugh and some smut alongside it, but stay away if you have the bad habit of getting too personally invested in even the most blatantly comedy-based stories that have a non-chalant character actually be non-chalant about anything that happens to him because he's used to it. It's not a good thing to do anyway but I know for a fact someone will get offended on behalf of this character even if the author made clear this comic is basically like a slapstick Tom & Jerry/Bugs Bunny cartoon moment. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ Anyway, recommended for more mature readers I suppose. It depends on your tastes tho!

I really adore this author! Such an amazing sense for writing but also throwing us lots of impressive smut scenes, giving us interesting storylines, personalities for characters and much more. Definitely going onto my list for fav authors. :)

DETAILED REVIEW WITH BASIC SPOILERS. Okay, so first off: Do not go into this for anything but smut or comedy, this is not a story to take seriously and critique the character's behavior because this does not attempt to be anything else but porn in comic form. You have been warned. XD If you want a sweet and loving seme, go look elsewhere. Because he DOES have his moments but he still holds true to who he is in the beginning of their relationship (which is literally all this comic shows; the start of it all.) Now, as mentioned comedy and smut is the focus here and they did that VERY well tbh. The seme is a ruthless mafia member, so his behavior doesn't randomly become cliche romantic, which is not to everybody's liking but it DOES hold true to his character. Because a ruthless mafia killer will NOT, realistically speaking, turn into a blushy sweet romantic as soon as he meets his potential lover. This is something the author did quite well but again; it will not be everybody's cup of tea. His behavior is questionable at least but for who he is it is perfect for his character and gladly the MC didn't randomly turn into a cocksleeve but he actually got into it. This COULD have been done better and with more care, but I think it is decent for what it is despite not being everybody's favourite route in a story. The MC himself is ABSOLUTELY adorable and I find his backstory and personality really great. It makes him feel realistic but at the same time like a typical 'this story will not be a serious and realistic one' kinda vibe. Weird as that might sound. It's a good mishmash. The art is good, but not great in some areas. Anatomy issues here and there are found but it's nothing too major. I wish the character design of the MC was a bit more detailed? Refined? Special? He looks awfully basic tbh. But he DOES make up for it with the comedy chibi art and his cute behavior. The character design of the seme is really great tbh. I like finally seeing a character that doesn't look well-rested and perfect but instead shows his stress and age in his facial details. Again, the storyline might not be everybody's thing but I think the author did well to make it clear this is not something to get emotionally invested in but instead just view it as a king-based reading material to get horny about and laugh at the funny moments and art. Anyone who cannot handle reading things this way should really NOT read this. It's certainly for a more mature audience, not just because of the smut and murder aspect in one moment but because of the overall tone and story needing someone to be capable of removing themselves from what is going on in this piece of fiction that is clearly only aimed at people liking to self-insert as the MC. Which IS a kink of people in sexual fantasies, as much as many people on here like to forget. (￣∇￣") I would certainly recommend this to more mature readers, not age-wise but in terms of mentality. The comedy is great tho it could even be more and carry this story for a hundred chapters together with the base storyline this has (shame it wasn't used for something longer, it would have been amazing for sure!). 8 outta 10, tho bordering a 9 for some people for sure because even if I do not like the forceful aspect of the smut, it was done well enough to actually not be something I minded too much in certain ways if we view it as a self-insert or kink fantasy that can be applied perfectly to oneself. It DOES depend on the person reading tho, no doubt.