ReviewRaptor's manga / #DUMB CHARACTER LOGIC(1)

Forbidden Odd Melody

Ongoing | 마셰리 (ma cherie) | 2022 released

The writing of this is riddled with bullshit logic and overall stupidity, not just from the characters but the author themselves. NO character here is likable, the story not interesting enough to have me keep reading and the art simply cannot carry this over the mountain of dumbness there is. Classic case of a smut comic pretending it has a cohesive, well-written story but there is really just nothing of value here besides the fucking scenes. Dropped. Not worth my time. It's just overall really badly done. :/