ReviewRaptor's manga / #DO NOT READ(110)

I was interested at first but the flaws in writing bother me greatly... There is so many issues in just the first 4 chapters, it feels like the writer doesn't know how life works. Or how embarassment works either... I mean, the fact that his 'love' for the neighbor can be overwritten so easily makes me dislike the MC tbh. He's the most shallow character I've seen in ages. And in this scenario he doesn't even have a reason to fall for him/have a wet dream about him other than seeing him half naked so...that's saying quite a bit about him in many ways. Mainly that he's just horny for his neighbor rather than love him. Tho there are plenty of other issues that make this all just weird to read. For example him jacking off to his suppposed crush's underwear, then being caught by the other guy and STILL agreeing to living together (that would never have happened with a person that reacted in such a world-ending way as the MC did, yet the author thought that would be a natural thing to happen...which is simply weird). I'm also confused as to why the MC was supposedly 'forced to live together'? He literally owns the apartment, right? And he was able to manage living there alone so far, so either the author didn't feel the need to include key information or this was just a quick dramatic idea to throw into dialogue to 'spice things up'. Which drama stories often enough do, sadly. The fact that he later thinks the guy just up and left without telling him, even tho they are living together and hence would be forced to communicate about this matter, is also unnatural in that scenario. Anyway, I'll give this a hard pass because I'm heavily bothered by the MCs personality and the general flawed logic. I honestly don't care if it 'gets better later on' either, because I'm not gonna bother hoping for the MC to be less annoying anytime soon. Especially with so many chapters this has. Give it a try, I suppose. But if you have any interest in a story making sense or being realistic in certain ways...you should probably skip this one.

The plot is interesting but...those faces are really off putting half the time and weird any other. So I really can't enjoy this all too much. I suppose if you're here to read smut and barely pay attention to the artstyle (or can endure to get used to it), then this might be a good read. But for me, as someone who likes good artwork and plot alike, this is a hard pass. Shame, really. But oh well, the psycho tag usually has these issues once in a while. Enjoy to whoever can. I'm outtie~

REVIEW TIME... This is the first time I've ever really, really disliked this genre of uke (genre of uke = a person like Akihito from Viewfinder). He's not just a fucking idiot, he also lacks any type of logic and does weird and seemingly random bs all the damn time. The seme isn't much better with his dick-controlled thinking from the very first encounter and seemingly changing personality whenever needed/most suitable to get a situation going (it didn't feel like a person with 2 sides to him, but rather 2 seperate personalities in the same body, if that makes sense?). I had hopes for this in the beginning, but the writing and character personalities (if you wanna call them that, as little as there is of it..) is really just bad. It's a good read if you aim for the sex scenes, but that's about it. Tho half the time there's issues with the anatomy of the characters as well (which is weird since the naked scenes seem to be mostly accurate). There is also no hint of this ever turning into any sort of healthy/good relationship of any sort. It feels very choppy and lackluster. In some ways it drags endlessly, in others it rushes from one happening to another. It's just not enjoyable to read. Really not anything of quality, so I'm out. Have fun to whoever enjoys it tho.

Yeet thyself away from this shit if you aren't into sick shit like rape and general gay-biased tropes (condescending behavior towards gay guys, mentality of 'they like getting fucked by any dick'/'they wanna fuck because they are gay', etc.).

I remember this. Pretty sure I added it to my list because the adult artworks are nice but with this kinda plot...really not something I'll read.

My comment got deleted but I'll say it again: The writing is amateur-like and just makes this unenjoyable to read. There is WAY too many things skipped and nothing is explained or even just visually hinted, not even a single word of 'hey this is the past' or 'XYZ years later, after I got reincarnated'. This is probably the worst story in terms of writing I have come across to be honest. And the only excuse is laziness, because it feels like the author just wanted to 'get on' to the good part and hence skipped literally ALL important information, plus discarded the importance of even just mentioning these things. I'm dropping this like a blazing potato. (Let's see if this comment also gets deleted. Probably by a staff member that's a die-hard fan or maybe involved with the author otherwise i can imagine. - So much for free speech on this website, huh? Slowly turning into Twitter and the like I see.)

This reads like some cringey af teenager firstime story. From the late 80s or 90s. WTF. XD Hard pass. It's rushed, the art is really not my thing and the writing is just lackluster.