ReviewRaptor's manga / #CRINGEY(1)

This reads like an 'epic' plotline a 12 year old wrote and thought it's the most amazing and impressive story ever to be written. But if you read it after gaining some knowledge about what good writing and storytelling is....it's nothing short of cringey and amateur-ish. It very much reminds me of one of my first stories I still have saved on a USB stick. That 'sterne ceremony' with exploding powers if the groom isn't there is somehow even more dumb than what I wrote back then tho. It just WAY too over the top and doesn't work well if you don't bother giving it a strong reason (which there is literall zero of). The plot is VERY amateur-ish in writing and storytelling. But it's probably a good read for newcomers. Those with more experience and a taste for great writing and story building should probably look elsewhere tho, there is nothing of interest to see here tbh.