ReviewRaptor's manga / #BORING(10)

Another one of these huh? Neither the plot nor the personality of the MC is interesting. If anything, her personality (the little bit she has) is really off-putting for me.

I dunno, this is just random and boring. The characters are bland and things happen but there's just no feeling to it since it feels so empty and rushed? It's not an enjoyable read for me.

Okay, upßloading ONE promo chapter is enough guys. Stop posting multiple ones that basically already tell me that this is just like any other shitty Omegaverse story. The art is okay, but the plot is so basic that I can't even describe it. Characters seem to have no personality except helpless for the uke and arrogant for the seme. Nothing of interest to be seen here. Moving on.

Boring, as all hell. Both the formatting/layout of the pages and the storytelling make this SO unbelievably slow paced. Many things feel rushed too tho, others obnoxiously shoe-horned. It's just a mess. It's generally a story that's terribly predictable but tries to throw bits and pieces in to make it 'hip, quirky and unique!', like a teenager on Tumblr that copies others and hence...isn't special in the slightest but just a weirdo. You and I have seen this plot a million times, but most of the time it has been executed better. it's like the author cherry picked popular plot themes and threw them all together, trying desperately to make it work as a somewhat coherrent story but...it's not really working. It's tedious and had me predict all happenings' outcomes as soon as they started. Which is just plain bad writing. For kids this might be a really good read, someone who doesn't know what all these cliche plot points will ultimately lead to and for someone that doesn't know what good writing is...but for anyone else? Spare yourself the pain. Not recommended, moving on.

I find myself completely bored and entirely uninterested at chapter 31 already. The base plot is a great idea and interesting, but the execution is very amateur-ish and almost child-like the way scenarios are written. Things are rushed, emotions or sense of urgency are not delivered properly, all while some parts are dragged out in dialogue that I really couldn't care less about since the characters are just not interesting but just annoying. It might be a good read for new readers or people who are bored. But for those with interest in well-written, well fleshed out and interesting writing...this isn't it. Even as a page-flicker I don't see this working since there is not gonna be a definite goal to flip through for (a kiss for romances, marriage for a trouble couple plot, etc.). It's just not interesting and if you have experience with writing, you can already tell this story will drag on and on and only reach a mildly satisfying goal (since the goal of the MC is NOT a big one to begin with). I'll drop this and give it a hard pass on all fronts. Not even the art can save it, it's mid really. Give it a try, but be warned if you have higher standards when it comes to stories. That's really all I can say.

The characters behave random sometimes, the storytelling is rushed and lacks detail when needed and the overall vibes this gives is 'halfassed'. The dude supposedly looks like another dude, but even the girl that had a cruch on said other dude doesn't even mention it. The mYsTeRiOuS secret can be seen from a mile away and the characters are just too bland to make this interesting. Neither the story nor the chars are interesting tbh. The story itself is one of the most bland and boring plots I've seen in ages. Even the most cliche and predictable shoujo highschool romance has more oomph to it. WTF.

I cannot think of the right word, it's similar to convoluted but not that. As in, the story is densely packed with info in a rough draft kinda way that was just mashed into a chapter as quick as possible to move the story along quick. There is too much going on too quickly but nothing is going at a good pace and explained well. Lacking detail and decent pacing in general we could say. Not sure what the word is but I'm pretty sure there was a fitting word in english. Does anyone know what word I'm looking for? It just doesn't come to mind. XD Anyway. My review-ish comment part is as follows: The story alltogether is a bit too predictable for me and does nothing new, the characters aren't exactly new either so I'm not really immersed in it with all the issues given. But I guess for people who haven't read much of these kinda plots and characters this could be an okay read if they are not overwhelmed by the rough drafty-ness of it all. I'm not really gonna read any more of it, i feel the novel would be a better read tbh but I cannot be bothered with that kinda task these days. XD Check it out for yourself but be warned about these few issues. Experienced readers might find them annoying but it's likely a case by case thing.

This is SOOOO utterly boring. 2 chapters and I have already lost interest in all the blabbering about the school, rules, how rich everybody is, etc.. And then they threww in random magic bullshit? No thank you. ^^ The writing is very over the place and didn't settle for a clear introduction and making things quick that REALLY are very uninteresting. Shame, since the art is nice. But that is not a saving grace in my book.