ReviewRaptor's manga / #BAD COMIC DEPICTION(1)

This was just infested with lackluster-ness...geez. The story itself is good tho there is a major flaw even then, but this is the first time it's only the COMIC ITSELF that ruined it. Not the art, it's good, but the way they portray scenes or rather the lack thereof is what ruined it. The monologue depicts the story as a reincarnation story, in which the MC has been given a second chance at life...but she never WAS reincarnated. She stabbed the guy and got banished all while talking about being reincarnated...just to get to the same outcome?? That makes no fucking sense. Unless the translation is shit and someone just MADE IT about reincarnation despite her just talking about 'being given a second chance' which just meant her NOT BEING KILLED FOR THE ATTEMPTED MURDER. One way or another, this is a major flaw that kinda ruins the reading experience. You cannot go about talking about how things went bad, then being reincarnated and STILL ending up in the only scenario we know (neither the text depicts a more miserable outcome for her before her alleged reincarnation nor does the comic depiction/art, so everything falls apart here). Someone either fucked up the writing or the story just IS horseshit in this aspect. The art is good enough, the story too, but i don't think it's anything new or original. It's only interesting aspect is the child, which...we all know will be the love interest...which is kinda creepy tbh. The age gap is way too big. Unless they suddenly come with the shit logic of: He's actually a grown as man, just a few years younger than the heroine! He's only so tiny due to malnourishment. Teehee~ :3 Which i have seen people do and it's just stupid on every level. I wouldn't recommend it as more than a page flipper. If they mess up the most basic, simplest but also important detail of the plot right off the bat, I have no hopes there will be no fuck-ups later on, so... Check it out but be warned that it's a story you've seen out there multiple times. All while not being a good representation to boot.