ReviewRaptor's manga / #Amateur Art(2)

I hope nobody who thinks like the MC ever gets isekai'd. Bitch, you wanna speed-run to your own execution THAT badly? XD Seriously, at least think for half a second if or if not your behavior would have bad consequences. We are talking medieval-type settings for these, usually, so getting your ass thrown in jail, executed or being called a witch that now needs to be off'd would happen faster than you could realize. DO. NOT. DO. THIS. I think the idea is nice, and I am certain I have seen something similar before, but her 'reckless abandon' is cranked to 11 and makes it really dumb. The art is decent but cannot carry. It lacks that certain factor to bring across emotions well in specific ways, as someone mentioned before me. And I think the factor is that there is not enough difference shown in the entire face from one emotion to another. And that makes it a bit bland overall. Pair that with the silly writing/dumb character logic and it's not really a good outcome. Good for first timers maybe, but not for seasoned readers who are looking for grand writing and impressive art to immerse themselves in. Decent but not good. Tho If you can view it as a comedy piece (which then again, the comedy is not nearly strong enough for), then I guess it can work as a light read regardless. I would say; give it a try. Maybe you can enjoy it as a read inbetween serious comics. :)

Why does this first chapter feeling like it's from the middle of a story instead of a beginning, as it should be? Kinda annoying tbh, because you feel like you missed alot of story and just randomly got thrown into it. I don't feel this is a translation issue either, so I'm not sure if the writing is the problem or not. Hard to say. The idea is good, but the execution lacking. It's not a bad read (as far as the first chapter goes) but it's not good either because it feels like major story parts were skipped and it rushes along to get to the fucking part as quickly as possible.