ReviewRaptor's manga / #AWFUL(91)

Wow, just wow. This felt like some fucked up, far-from-reality fetish fuckfest that a 14 year old tumblr user wrote. The little story that is there is butchered and hardly made into a cohesive story, it's choppy and jump-cuttish as all hell and even makes you think that entire chapters are missing. Some things are mentioned but not explained, others are just yeeted into your face and you have to accept them then and there, because around the next corner is another pile of shit waiting to be flung into your face. This is really just a fetish, self-insert I'm sure. Because even IF you are into these kinda forceful relationship dynamics...you cannot enjoy them because the author made zero effort to make ANY character likable or understandable in any way. They hardly have a personality and what they do have is trash and remains so throughout. This story, if you wanna call it that, throws happenings at you without stringing them together properly, all so (seemingly to me anyway) that the next cringey fuck scene can start. This is trash. And the type i seldom see on here with this level of average, early 2000-type of artworks. It's not worth reading. Spare yourself the waste of time. Not even as wanking material, mind you. There is nothing of worth to be found here from start to finish.

Sorry, but this manga shows perfectly what's fucked up about the Omegaverse community. Their first time was nothing but rape, if their roles were reversed you fuckers would be condemning the Alpha for forcing himself onto the Omega, but because the roles are as they are you guys actually cheer this on. WTF, shame on you guys. Get therapy. The Alpha might be a bit arrogant and deserving of being put in place a bit, but the Omega is nothing short of a psycho. If he hadn't forced himself onto the Alpha, I'd actually recommend this. But like this? No thanks. You can keep this fucked up piece of trash in the garbage bin where it belongs. The art might be nice but the story is trash. And I know not everyone is cheering the Omega on, but DAMN are there a lot of idiots who do. FFS this Omegaverse community brings forth the biggest trash, not gonna lie. 0 outta 10 - Avoid reading. Don't be fooled by the pretty art.

Great, another one of these sub/dom trash stories that just use the trope to justify displaying abuse and glorifying it. The smut is ugly and a total turn-off as well and the art doesn't save it. Nothing to see. Moving on.

Sorry, but if you want to turn a script into a story the basic things to follow is: DON'T MAKE THE DRAMATIC STARTING POINT THE FUCKING DESCRIPTION AND THEN START THE COMIC FROM THE END OF SAID DESCRIPTION. Can you people at least TRY to make a cohesive story?? Because it sure as hell doesn't feel like it. I mean, you were so incredibly lazy to skip the introduction (that you put in writing into the summary only, not even a text-only page with fancy frames and some lackluster pictures in the back...as is the NORM for anyone that wants to rush past certain points at the start of a story)...nah, you fully on went the route of "I cannot be fucking bothered to put important information into THE COMIC ITSELF, but rather just scribble it as a description and make people feel like they started reading in the middle and/or some chapters are missing. :3". If you don't want to put in effort...just don't do it at all. It wasn't THAT much work you had to put in and it was important too. If you're lazy at the start, it's plain to see you'll cut corners at every chance you get and hence make the experience (for the reader) at very best mediocre or absolutely bad because it doesn't feel like a cohesive, flowing story. The baseplot is interesting, but given how much of a throw-off the bad writing practices are I'm not gonna bother with this. I've read enough stories to simply know how obnoxious this corner-cutting will get, so no, not gonna waste any time on lackluster works and instead will look for ones with effort put into them. Not recommended, on any front tbh.

Could you lot STOP butchering stories by 'censoring' the sexual scenes? If you can't handle scanlating hardcore stuff, don't do it. Especially if you basically go and change the genre and butcher the story to the point of people not knowing wtf is going on since pages of context/conversation is missing. Just stop and leave it to someone else please. This is incredibly obnoxious...

Great, it seems that glorifying and fetishizing murder/murderers is becoming a thing now. At least this one has more logic than the last one and he does NOT let the body rot in his home for days or weeks (which didn't make sense for a public figure in that other trash work). He only lets them lie around for a day or two, even if that also makes no sense. The logic is horseshit, the fetishizing of a killer/psycho is downright sickening and the chapters are jumbled up as fuck early on. DO NOT READ if you have any decent humanoid features, mentally speaking. If this was a story that portrayed a psycho killing for good reasons, wanting to stop and needing to get help with the help of their newfound love, then I'd read it. But this is just subhuman trash for people that think fetishizing, let alone jacking off to murderers (just because they look nice in the artworks) is A-OK. Fuck this. Even the trashiest Omegaverse crap is better than this kinda shit. And THAT's saying alot if you know my feelings about that rape glorification genre...

Okay, so the author HONESTLY wants me to cheer on a girl with as little as a personality as a piece of toest and a guy that justifies killed puppies AND their mother and supposed sire look-alikes all just because the dog ran away while in heat and got pregnant? Yeah, no. Fuck that shit. Whoever thinks a character like that is in any way redeemable lacks understanding of humans other than themselves. If you had given him a reason as in, she turned on me so I had to kill her because she couldn't be trusted anymore. Then maybe I'd have bothered reading this. But not like this. This is yet another author that thinks giving a character a psycho personality trait can just remain unaddressed, be glossed over and/or just used as a 'ooOOooooOo~, he's so scary and dominant! <3' kinda trope trait. Do better. And stop glorifying psychos and murderers. You people have issues.