The story is a bit amateur-ish in writing. There are quick scene changes, althought small ones, but there is also the issue of not letting emotions get to the readers. It just happens and then the next thing happens. It's not really well written.
The anatomy of the characters is REALLY not my thing, Roblox Anatomy 101. XD And the fucking blurry irises of the MC and such REALLY REEEEAAAALLY annoy my eyes.
It might be a nice read for beginners or MAYBE to flip pages for the smut chapters (I don't know, I'll not bother reading anymore of this) but all in all it's not really something I would recommend in any way.
It's nice that the MC has a likable personality and the love interest is not the cliche bad boy or good guy type, but the faults I find are not enough to keep me invested.
A Secret Romance Between Us