Boobs's manga / #Interesting(3)

Honestly dont know how i deel abt wverything wanting to fuck the mc lol for a bl romance story its hella off putting cuz of how much story it takes up. but for a porn it has some yummy sex scenes uhhhh the demon said he used to get life force from the granpa???? does that mean they were fucking?????? like how is that not weird asl for the mc. Also why is the family tree so hidden like we just skip from granpa to mc like what abt granpa's lover or tge mc's parents. overall i feel like this story couldve been written in a more impactful way by not having all the loose ends be in the side stories. by how its writeen its a pretty mid story like i disnt even feel tge connection between the mc and the ml lije i could see how much tge mc liked mr dream but it didnt rlly translate well when hus true form was revealed. and dont even get me started on the multiple sexual assaults the mc goes thru or tgat sus angel child. like she/he's only developed the plot by making the mc produce milk. like come on why are they dissapearing when its needed for the plot????