like the overall plot But based on the novel readers, it'll turn out real bad sOOOO
the supernatural part could be like hayley (pretty mc) inheriting mason's (the one in his body atm) skills and memories, thus making him better but i do agree that the romance plot is eh ,,, no and could do better as a story if he were to go go rehab & slowly change
like he'd be able to hear mason's opinions on the matter, bc his consciousness is there but not ?? fully
like in the end he's still dead, he's gonna be like his guardian angel or wtv which will stay stuck to mc until their time is up from the ritual he did
basta i like how it's going atm, but the romance :// no and character development > new character
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