Mameiha's manga / #Rivals(22)

The story itself was written well and I enjoyed the plot concept. The art is not my style and sports fandom/fanaticism is lost on me. The fact that, despite those two things, I enjoyed this story, speaks volumes about the mangaka's story telling abilities.

The story itself is a definite winner. Writing is good and the characters are adorable. I'll continue reading for sure. That said... the translations are pretty rough until volume three and the scans get bad in the middle chapters of volume two, but improve dramatically through three. The translator for "Netorare" was either a virgin to porn, twelve or both... not knowing what double penetration was. That kinda concerns me. This is pornography, why are "children" (16 or 61) translating porn?

Last update 2013.

Mediocre, at best. The dialogue was stilted, choppy and confusing when it wasn't dull. The plot concept had great potential that was just never reached.