The coolest nugget's manga / #rivals(6)

the story line was very strong and it kept my intrest throughout it all maybe that is why i got it finished all in 1 day or maybe because i have no life i loved the main character she was funny and had a strong determination when she wanted to do something i also loved the way you could not predict what she would do next and how she got the thing done but i wish this had more at the end e.g i wish she had children because i would like to see how they turned out but over all it is a very good manga the only thing that could be done better is to improve the ending (*v*)

this is one of the cutest yaoi stories i have read so far,i just love the way the seme here was really smart but he kinda acted like a total idiot at times which was quite funny,one of the things i also loved about this is that it didnt drag on and on about something and it got stright to the point instead about it being the uke falling in love with the seme at first and being upset on why the seme acts like he doesnt care for the uke but this story was about the semes point of view and followed the seme while at the same time it included the uke so the readers wouldnt get confused and wonder why the uke/seme is upset so i loved this change of pace and i am hoping for more stories like this to come my way.(*v*)

Devil turns into a little kid then another devil is a pervert and trys to fuck the kid (^0^)