Crispy_Robin's manga / #supernatural(151)

In case if first story the story development didn't make sense.....the concept was good but it wasn't put greatly.... The second story was good....but the story seemed a lil but rush and the development wasn't good either(in case of uke)...

It's a masterpiece.....It is sooo cute And the uke is precious....I am waaayy too curious about what kogane told about the seme at 4th chap.....but other than that it's waaayyyy too cute...love the whole story

The last story was really get(from chap 3-5).....loved the couple.....but the first two chapter had no depth or story in it...the art wasn't grt either especially art in the second chapter for second couple was horrible

It was really good....not a bad one....just didn't feel much attachment to it

It's really cute and the story progression is just great.....love it( ˘ ³˘)

It was very good.... Sure that the daycare guy and seme's dad know each other.....it's really cute and the way seme takes care of them is awesome....love it

The ending didn't make any sense

All the story had love at first sight story except the second one....the girls here just fall so easily in love and give up their virginity(in second one the girl wanted to give her virginity to a gigolo)....

Love the second couple a lot(✿ ♡‿♡)....if it was all about that then it would definitely be 5 stars(^_^).....wanted to see their marriage.....they just could have done double marriage(it would have been perfect then)....why didn't they(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻