Crispy_Robin's manga / #student(56)

It was great.....This was absolutely adorable.....loved the way it actually progressed....the seme was seriously cute tho...the fact that the seme fell in love with the uke when uke was 6 yrs old(it wasn't love but love at the same time...) tipped me off a lil(tho loved the how when the uke was 6 years old it wasn't anything unpleasant from seme's part....like he didn't have any desire or anything.....it was only pure....and then he started having those desire after uke started going to middle school ... loved how the seme thought "so this is what happens when some fall in love""so dirty"-cz he masturbated to uke)...but then again loved the fact that the seme literally waited like 13 yrs(basically for the uke to be adult) and the best part he himself didn't actually proposed to the uke....it was the uke who proposed to the seme....and the uke never knew about the seme's feeling....he hid it sooo well and was always himself....I honestly loved each and every characters and the way they progressed....loved the reason as to why the uke's parents was against their relationship (they weren't completely against it....they said they will accept it after the uke and seme show them they are happy....the reason they didn't immediately gave the blessing was because they were worried about if they will continue to be happy after a long time....loved when uke's mom said it wasn't bcz of society or bcz it was two men)...also really wanted to see the uke telling about his rltnship to his frnds(would have loved to see their reaction)..

It was very bad....felt like a hentai...felt like no story whatsoever.....and everything was all over the place....kinda like the story telling was really bad....the art was bad...like overly drawn bara...kinda wished the friend would actually fuck uke too(or at least try to).... At least it would be a threesome (like the seme was fucking the uke and making the uke cut all ties with everyone else and then uke's friend came and saw that the seme was fucking uke and the seme was like uke is mine get out....but then the seme was like you don't wanna get out? Then stand here and watch how I fuck my brother)

It was very bad... The first story was something I hoped I didn't read(felt same during the re-read)...it just didn't make any sense.... literally no sense....some plots were completely unnecessary.....I just felt that uke loving his dad part was bad....and the way he said it to seme was worse....and then r8 after the uke coming to know about his dad's marriage then having sex with seme and then instantly thinking that he just adored his dad but fell for seme was the worst part(uke was literally crying when he had sex with the seme).....I honestly liked the part when the seme told the uke that he will see uke as his brother from now on and the uke was being conscious about it....but the uke's feeling just didn't make sense....would have loved that part without those previous part.... The second story felt really rushed since it was only 2 chaps.....I liked the story base....would have loved it more if the couple's relationship was a lil bit more slow paced.....it felt like their feelings were really rushed(especially the uke's)...

It was good.....the fact that the uke's co-worker fell in love with him was really unnecessary.....just why simply make it love triangle (there was no need of it to advance the plot or seme -uke's relationship....like seme and uke already fell for each other and so there was just no need.....) Really wish for his co-worker to have a spin off.....liked how they showed things from seme's perspective in the bonus chap.....that was a cood addition(loved how he fell for uke at first sight but then when the uke said it was impossible he was all sulky and all ...also the plan of his to seduce the uke after they escape was cool)....really liked both seme and uke's mom(especially uke's)....the part where she lied to the uke and said that them not being together would kill them was cool(it was so that they wouldn't separate cz their merrage wasn't their wish.....they had to do it bcz of a curse that was in their village)

Was good.....It was wholesome.....love the couple ...a drama free plot which is really cute....wanted to see more of them...actually wanted them to have sex with uke's working cloth(seme wanted to do it while recording it but the uke was like working cloth is a no-no and didn't wish I I record it....and got angry with the seme when he was trying to push uke into doing it.....was kinda happy to see them later on when they did do video when having sex).....really wished to see a spin off of uke's brother (glad that he have one....Love me love my dog is the name)

It was good....seme's sisters were really cute...it was fun to see them always misunderstanding (the first time when the uke went to their house the uke 's eyes were swollen little bit....they thought he was crying cz someone was bullying him so they were trying to console him....the other time bcz of being busy the seme and uke didn't really talk to each other for a few days.....when they asked seme about uke the seme replied that he didn't know and that he haven't lately spoken with the uke....they misunderstood and actually called the uke taking seme's phone...)..... the twin's were super cuteee......loved how the seme's and uke's story progressed....tho the part where the seme kissed the uke in the middle of the conversation and after that they nonchalantly went back to talking felt kinda weird.....really wished to know who got 1st place at th end(they were fighting to be in the 1st place...)

It was good....I honestly wanted to see the aftermath of the seme meeting the uke's family....I wanted to see what happened when the uke's parents thought the seme was a yakuza(the seme look scary like a yakuza) and then the uke introduced seme as his bf to his parents....I just wanted to see his parents reaction and also their reaction after knowing that the seme a policeman....I honestly thought that the seme will probably be involved in an accident as he is a police officer and the uke cut him off cause the uke wanted them to be sex friends but the seme loved him.....I wanted some drama(〒﹏〒)....and also the conversation the uke had with the plushies that the seme and the uke made(they didn't make it together....the seme gave uke a plushie when they met and the uke made a similar plushie whom he called the other plushie's twin sister)....the uke said that it was a dream but then one of the plushie said that they were the only one continuing the show and said many more weird things which looked as if it was not only a mere dream....have kinda gave "kinght fantastic night" vibe....but then it was nothing like that(=_=)

It was great.....really loved it a lot.....the art was really beautiful....the seme....at the end when the seme got jealous of uke's classmate was sooo cute(uke's classmate invited uke for drinks but the seme and uke had a date so uke rejected his classmate....and then at the end of the date when they were parting ways, his classmate saw them and called out to uke .....and they started kinda flirting with him while drunk and the seme felt jealous)....really would have loved it if there was a sequel or extra chaps even.....loved it how after meeting the seme uke's life completely changed(he had to work quite a number of part time and couldn't sleep properly bcz he had to send money to his mom and sister....and then uke gave him high paying job as his housekeeper and that helped uke greatly)

It was good.....really liked the second couple.....the fact that the seme was in one sided love and yet agreed to be with the friends with benefit with the uke seemed sad.....would have loved it if they had more scenes ....like I need more of them....all the side story should have been about them.....tho the last one where the uke was like I understand what the seme from the main couple said at that moment was good(basically the uke of the main couple and secondary couple were best friends and from the main couple the seme was like a playboy and once already rejected the uke in the part calling what they had was fling ....and then the uke felt hurt after knowing about it....they broke up and the seme went after him....when they reconciled the uke of secondary couple told the main seme to not hurt the main uke again....and the main seme was like he wouldn't do that and then the second couple's uke was like the main seme acted all pathetic asking for main uke's forgiveness when he knew if he pushed the main uke a bit then the main uke would give in....and then the main seme was like he had to do it cz he didn't wanna be someone the main uke loved once long ago ...chap 48 if not understandable).....

It was good...it was understandable when the seme was being willful and hated the thought of the uke sleeping with someone else....and so having sex was understandable....but the fact that they had a deal that both the uke and the seme would cheer for each other and yet the seme acted willful everytime he saw the uke with his crush just made me a little angry(the seme was in love with the uke whereas the uke was in love with someone else....and so the seme proposed the uke an idea of one sided love alliance in which both of them will cheer for each other and the uke knew the fact that the seme was in love with him)......really wanted the seme to introduce the uke to his sister.....wanted to see her reaction(he told her he would tell her about uke later....and also their mother was no longer so the sister was kinda like his mother).....