Crispy_Robin's manga / #multiple stories(79)

It was good.....both the story was really cute... In the first story, I wanted to see how they became couple.....they were already established....would have liked it if there was a flashback.... The second story was really cute....was going to almost cry when the uke was wrongly accused and he felt nothing to it cause he was used to it.....hated how he was expelled when all he did was punch someone cause that person had hitted the uke....hated how everyone keeps on misunderstanding the uke and saying bad things about him without even knowing a thing.....I loved seme's love for uke....just loved it how he kept on loving the uke for so long without even knowing if they will meet......I was almost close to crying when the seme gave the uke his ring back saying that the uke didn't need to force himself to be with the seme(the seme helped the uke when he was homeless and had nowhere to go)....I really wanted to see how the uke's reaction would be when they will be going to have sex( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

It was good.....I wanted more of the third story.... The first story was good....but it just felt as if something was missing....I wanted to know more about the teacher who fell in love with the uke.....it was confusing tbh....one moment it felt he loved him and the other moment it felt he proposed the uke only for the sake of the seme and uke to get together.....would have loved it if he had story of his own.... The second story was adorable...just didn't like the fact that uke didn't realize his feeling after the uke and seme got into fight and the uke seemed really sad and he was calling the seme stupid for not understanding anything(I thought for sure he was thinking about his feeling for the seme)....so it was just weird when the seme confessed to the uke and the seme was gonna kiss the uke and when the seme asked if he was gonna push him away instead of saying he love him too the uke was like he don't mind if it's seme.....it was as if that was the moment when the uke came to know about his feelings.... The story was the best....but the worst part is that it was an one-shot (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻.. ....I wanted to see more of them....I just liked the part when the uke(he might even be seme...since their position weren't shown) just put his hand forward and told the seme that he can arrest him for taking sneak photos of him(the uke took sneak photos of seme and seme was a cop)that part was hilarious...uke was just took cute....would have loved to see how they would turn out after being official (╥﹏╥)

It was horrible.....all of the stories had open ending.... The first story was good....but the ending made no sense...we don't even know if they met let alone knowing if they got together....it was wayyyy too big of an open ending....hated it The second story was the same....there was even no claim about loving each other or anything.....it was as if they will remain friends forever.... Won't say much about the third story since it's actually a part of another story but then again the whole manga was horrible

It was average....the way they talked in like "yo type accent" was sooo bad.....just didn't like it.... The first story was good.....had problem reading it cause it was like in yo type accent.....but the story wasn't really bad except the fact that they weren't like completely together(although they did kiss and all but still like not official).... The second story was like completely incomplete....just hated it.....they not only didn't end up together but also there was no sign of them falling in love....just pure bad.... The third story was good tbh....liked the way it progressed.... although I thought the seme actually was in love with the uke's dad....but he wasn't, it was only pure respect as uke's dad was seme's professor....but overall it was good

Liked the main story and both the side story was just full of angst and incomplete.....so it was fine.... The main couple was really good.....I wanted more of them....I loved how it paced....I loved it how the seme's friend took it so casually and that was what made the uke open upto he seme (ule was afraid that people around the seme would ridicule him for being gay and being in love with his teacher....cause he had a similar experience when he was in a relationship with his friend and they were ridiculed for being gay.....they ended up separated with each other and his friend and ended up marrying someone else).....I actually wanted the seme to tell about the uke to his family..... I think it would have been awesome.... The second story felt really incomplete....they started as sex friends and I hoped to see more....ending just as they became sex friends felt really incomplete and bad to me....also the fact that the seme thinking that the uke was worse than straight guy(seme at first thought that the uke was straight....but when he got to know that the uke was in unrequited love with someone he thought that he was worse than straight guy as if the seme had no chance at all)and then going for uke was weird....I thought after saying that he would distance himself from the uke.... The third story was the worst....I wasn't ready for it.....they just ended up being separated and having their own family....one thing confused me in the story and that is that the uke saw a dream at the beginning when he and his friend told each other that they loved someone but it was a secret(showing that they didn't know that both of them loved each other) and then later on the seme told that the uke had pushed him away and asked why did then the uke contacted the seme(pointing that the seme confessed and the uke didn't accept or something like that....atleast pointing that the uke knew about the seme's love)....it's just didn't feel r8 as if there was something that was missing....hoped it would have been showed.....just felt confusing....and I was hoping that the seme being married would be a lie or the seme would have a bad relationship with his wife but nothing sort of that happened....so hated the fact that they had sex(I am not sure if they had but they did touch each other)

It was bad.....it had the potential to be good tbh....the uke was a tsundere and the seme was a sadist....loved the part about seme teasing uke.....it was good until the seme raped the uke....altho it's not like I completely hate rape it's just I didn't like the love through skin ship without consent.....the rape was honestly unnecessary.....would have loved it if the seme would tease the uke without rape and those skin ship and the uke would fall in love with him....liked the fact that uke realized he loved the seme after he distanced himself and the fact that it was his plan....if only that skin ship and rape didn't exist....also the uke was really weak...he just got pushed down everytime which was just bad..... The second story started good.....but it too had that unnecessary rape(altho in that case it wasn't....the uke allowed the seme to give a thighjob)....it was good until the seme proposed to the uke and even after the uke slapped the seme after getting kidded by him the seme continued to force the uke which I didn't like at all.....would have loved it more if the seme would pull back...also it was incomplete=_=....the seme was like he will never give up....but the uke didn't accept him yet at that time=_=

It was good.... Loved the first story but wanted to see more of the uke and his ex....wanted to know why did his ex suddenly came in his life and lied to him that they broke up due to a misunderstanding whereas the truth was she cheated on him.....if it was simply without any reason then his ex deserved some punishments.....also wanted to know how seme's parents would react if they came to know about the seme's and uke's relationship..... The second story felt a little rushed.....would have loved to see things from the seme's POV too.....would have been great if we could know how and when did both of them fell in love with each other.....just felt really rushed

It was average.... multiple stories made it hard to rate it The first story was good.....would have loved it more if there were more details about them....the uke took the seme to a room when their coffin was small(they were vampires) and then told that it was his room when he was alive....I wanted to see how he lived when he was alive and wanted to know that why and how did he turn vampire when he was human at first The story was bad....it ended in a cliffhanger... honestly speaking it kinda did not make sense as to why the uke had such an illusion of going inside a fairy tale book he used to enjoy as a child.....and he ended up having sex with a rabbit(half rabbit half human type)....wanted to see the seme's and uke's relation at the actual world since we saw the seme as a student of uke's school and the seme told the uke during his illusion that it was time for them to meet in the real world..... The third story was fine.... honestly it lacked more chapters ...the story was good but lack of chapter made it seem like it was rushed.....would have love to see things from seme's POV and more of their interaction The fourth story was bad.....the story felt really rushed, un-paced and weird.....while the seme was sexually assaulting uke he started crying and there was no reason given for it....and then after that the uke started yearning for him and he told the seme that he will take care of him(the seme).... honestly didn't make sense as to why he wanted to take care of someone who assaulted him and moreover had an open ending....the seme didn't even reply The fifth story was good....it was cute....the story felt a little unnatural and fast-paced.....would have loved it if there was more to the characters and if they would show more of uke and seme's conversation before they fell in love....it just happened so fast The sixth one was good too.....It was super fast-paced....like I don't understand as to how they fell in love with each other in their first walk(the uke wanted to boost his confidence by wearing heels....he used to wear it at his home....the seme and uke were neighbors and due to the noise the seme got irritated and went to ask the uke to stop the noise...he thought it was uke's gf or something....and by his surprise it was the uke and the seme told he would help uke by taking him to walk during night) ..I would have loved it more if they had went on more walks and then finally loving each other.....it was honestly really fast-paced.....also cute 7th story was fine....wanted to know the pretext of everything tbh.... specially how the seme started to like the uke and all....it felt like they were already in love with each other from the start(the seme was completely....uke might have developed during the story)... Every story needed more chapters and more moment tbh.....just felt really incomplete

It was good...... The first story was fine.....did not understand how the uke fell in love with the seme....like I felt the seme needed something like a redemption arc(ik it's small to have a redemption arc but still there could be a chapter regarding his redemption).....the uke felt a really demeanor type of person but somehow gave into the seme without any reason....which felt really weird.... The second story was very good....wanted more of it... It was honestly cute......the alien was super cute and loved how their relationship went....loved how the seme reacted when he came to know that he loved the uke and that he was ashamed to face the uke....would have loved it more if they had some more misunderstanding tbh

It was fine.... The first story was ok.....wanted to see how the seme fell in love with the uke....the guy was in unrequited love with the uke for a long time....would have loved to know what started it...... everything kinda went on really fast....it felt like the story kinda didn't have any start rather we started seeing it from the middle.... The second story was kinda cute.... honestly speaking wasn't really a fan of the seme ....he just seemed way too childish....I mean it was kinda sad to see him being in unrequited love and then the part where he wanted to hold the uke's hand but pulled his hand away because he was afraid was sad but his childish characteristics just made those things not sad...I don't know why but didn't like that character