Crispy_Robin's manga / #multiple stories(79)

It was very bad... The first story was something I hoped I didn't read(felt same during the re-read)...it just didn't make any sense.... literally no sense....some plots were completely unnecessary.....I just felt that uke loving his dad part was bad....and the way he said it to seme was worse....and then r8 after the uke coming to know about his dad's marriage then having sex with seme and then instantly thinking that he just adored his dad but fell for seme was the worst part(uke was literally crying when he had sex with the seme).....I honestly liked the part when the seme told the uke that he will see uke as his brother from now on and the uke was being conscious about it....but the uke's feeling just didn't make sense....would have loved that part without those previous part.... The second story felt really rushed since it was only 2 chaps.....I liked the story base....would have loved it more if the couple's relationship was a lil bit more slow paced.....it felt like their feelings were really rushed(especially the uke's)...

Honestly the story felt really weird and didn't make sense....I didn't like any of the uke in the story except the last one who was kinda ok....and all the one-shots left me hella confusing as to what I am even reading The main story felt really rushed....I kind of get the seme's love at first sight but did not understand the uke's feeling(altho it kinda felt understandable after the uke said that the seme is so bright and straightforward that he fell for him....but it's still feels weird)....I don't like uke's character at all tbh....I like tsundere it's true....but uke is the annoying type of tsundere.....also wanted to know what happened after uke's dad saw them kissing together....as he fainted if felt like he didn't know....but their(uke's family) previous was as of they knew(which didn't make sense either) The second story(which was an one-shot) honestly didn't make any sense....the uke felt like an animal or something....like sooo weird....I just don't know....he felt really weird...and the way their feelings grew was bad.... The third story would be something I would have liked if it was not an one shot.....we didn't like get any character introduction or anything.....the seme just proposed and they started having sex....that was all....we didn't even get to know how they fell in love or anything The fourth story(one shot) felt like it had no story at all....I had no idea what was going on....it was weird af.... The fifth(last) story(one shot) kinda made sense...and honestly was the best out of all the story.....but that one too felt weird...at first it felt as if the uke is a really kind guy...both the seme and the uke knew each other for a while and the uke let the seme have a sleepover in his house(as he is a kind guy and seme loved that part of him)...and they suddenly started to have sex r8 after the seme confessed....the uke didn't even replied......

The relationships formed really quickly....none of them actually made sense.... The first couple didn't make sense tbh....one moment the seme was like "are you fucking with me???" When the uke asked if the seme liked him....and the next moment the seme and the uke were in a relationship....that didn't make any sense at all ....the reason for uke's love also didn't make sense......the seme called him cute and he started following the seme....I just don't understand it at all.....it was pretty bad.....except when someone who loves seme came and altho what I expected didn't happen still that scene was good The second story was the same....the feelings just didn't make sense....the seme was like he won't give a name to someone he doesn't love....but the seme gave the uke name at the first moment....there was no sign of love at first sight or anything....it just didn't make sense The third story would have been great if it had more plot to it.....I just didn't understand the reason of uke's feeling....like he was completely in love with the other guy and out of no reason fell in love with the seme....like srsly....if only r8 after getting rejected the seme would have consoled him and their relation would then grow....then it would have been wayyy better tbh

It was good....and really sad....I wanted more of the first couple tbh....the second couple was cute....and since it was an one shot I thought it would be rushed but it wasn't....which was good....loved the pacing of both couple.....but I wanted to see some fluffiness between them after the angst and drama they went through....it would have been just awesome if they had some afterwards story

It had so many one shots which is why it's hard to rate it....╮(╯_╰)╭ I didn't like the first story at all....the seme had gap moe....he is popular as cool student whereas he actually likes chocolate a lot and is a crybaby.... honestly speaking I like gap moe....but the way seme was drawn just didn't suit it.....like everytime he cried or acted cute it felt horrible(-_- )ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳ The second story was not bad....I like relationship with teacher X Student.....but I just didn't understand some things....the teacher was a trainee and at his last day, the uke confessed to him and they got together (I think...I mean they had sex)....but then they just time leaped to 6 months and then the seme came as a permanent teacher....the uke told he was worried and why didn't the seme told about it to him before....that's the confusing part....I mean I just don't get it....didn't they start dating....so why would the uke act like that¯_( ͠° ͟ʖ °͠ )_/¯ The third story was cute....I wanted more of them.....I actually wanted to know how they started their relationship (it was an already built relationship)(TT) The fourth one didn't give off any feeling....would have loved it more if the love triangle had more to it tbh....it felt really bland and really rushed....would have loved it more if there were scenes from seme's POV too(=_=) The last story felt completely incomplete....like literally incomplete....all the incubus did was had sex with the uke and then he was like he wanted to do it more....and was like "is it love?"....he wanted to possess(not literally....make the uke his*) the uke but still the uke had no talk in it....uke's feeling wasn't even shown or anything....nothing developed between them either...it felt horrible (ﾉ°_o)ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳

It was fine.....wanted drama in all of them but none had(there was potential to it) Didn't like the first story that much.....the uke's feeling felt really rushed....from the first till the moment they started dating, everything seemed to happen sooo fast....would have been better if it was a lil slow paced....liked the punishment plot but it felt it wasn't executed well...it felt the uke was like forced to like it and all....which felt weird.... The second story was really good....after the confession when the uke was avoiding the seme(the uke was sorting out all of his previous relationship)....the prob was solved really easily.....wanted a lil drama to go on.... The third story was really good....hate the fact that it was one shot.....would have loved to see more of it....

It was average.....don't like the fact that it had multiple stories The first story felt rushed tbh.....there was no exact reason of why they fell in love with each other....it just happened.....there was no depth.... The second story felt stupid but enjoyed it tbh....the way the uke were saying some idiotic things with the kids(about their dicks) felt really stupid to me.... The third story was cool....would have loved it if they had more scene......wanted them to actually break up and then the uke feeling bad about it and then reconciling again

Stories felt rushed..... The first story wasn't bad...liked it but felt a little rushed.....hated the beginning when the uke was actually in a relationship with a married man....just didn't like that fact.....wanted the uke to confess his feelings rather than the seme.....and the story felt little bit messy.... The second story was cute but it was an one shot....wanted more of it....would have loved it more if it had more plot and scenes to it ... The third story felt completely incomplete....it didn't even felt like they were together

It was bad....the art was really bad....made it more unenjoyable the first story felt annoying.... didn't like the uke's character....it was just weird....one moment he thinks that the seme is really serious about the uke and think like he(uke) is the only one who knows about seme's gentle side and the the next moment he think about breaking up with the seme because he thinks seme is playing around....like srsly(=_=)....I just wanted him to suffer atleast a lil bit tbh The second story started of good....liked the story but then in the next chap it turned bad....I didn't think I would ever say this but I feel it would have been better if it were an one shot tbh....I mean I do get that the seme was kind of unsure about what to do after becoming lover with his friends and the fact that he wasn't going all the way was acceptable to me....but the way it went and then resolved just didn't appeal me....the uke told the seme that he(seme) was confusing friendship and love and then decided to break up and all and then ran away...and then the seme became angry and his usual smiley character changed and then their friend told that the uke wanted to do it everyday and then the prob resolved....I mean I just didn't like how it went....also wanted to see everyone reacting happily after seme went to his all smiley character....