Crispy_Robin's manga / #multiple stories(79)

The story felt a bit rushed and lacked depth...I wanted more of the one shot story too....it was good but had to be an one shot(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫

Wanted more of the first and second story......they felt so incomplete

It was fine.... The first story was the best out of all.....it's just in the first story the seme proposed but the uke didn't respond ....I wanted more of it.... The story was quite interesting and unique and wanted to see more of the couple .....wanted them as a couple sooo bad....also the part where the seme was like it's only 5 seconds I have been captivated by you for 16 years was sooo good(the uke had the power to copy sexual urge of people when he looked at their eyes for 6 seconds and in that six seconds the person would get captivated by him....when the seme didn't get captivated the uke asked the reason and the seme answered that) Didn't really like the second story much.....it was not only incest but twincest....damn....tho liked the opposite yet similar part(they had opposite personality...so kinda like opposite attract but were in love with each other so similar as they r twins and it is abnormal for them to fall in love with each other) The third story was also twisted but I ended up kinda liking it.....would have liked to a see a series about them ngl....like both stalking each other kinda feels nice....it kinda felt cool how the seme kept hidden camera in uke's house(although they were not hidden as they were pretty much visible and the uke knew about it)....like it was cool The fourth story was really twisted....damn like how all three were masochist....tho in the last scene it was kinda concerning to see one of them held a saw(it definitely wasn't saw but looked like one)....kinda wanted one of them getting banged by two together ngl(like two of them love one....and that guy literally liked pain....and so for him the other two started beating each other up....and then also started having sex....which that guy came to know and was like lemme in on ur secret too....and then both ended up having sex with him....the guy came to know the truth....and then at the end both were like tell us your secret...which was getting beaten up duh) Kinda wanted to see the orgy in the fifth one ngl....also wanted to know if the actor ended up being a normal one or remained an AV actor....like he was an gay AV actor who used to top(and a raining AV actor at that too....cz he was good at not ejaculating).....and used to held guys who had similar look to the camera man (who was his friend and apparently his love interest)....and then the cameraman ended up fucking him(he wanted to held the camera man though) and also filmed that(he ejaculated a lot at that time) and then they showed a release of his new movie(which was really famous and didn't look like an AV movie)

It was cute and adorable....loved it♡(ӦｖӦ｡) .... The main story was just cute af....want more....and I also want more of the one shot....it was sooo adorable....and altho we know it but the couple didn't end up together....I hoped so much that they will show it to us...I want moree.....it's frustrating (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻

It was good The main story was cute......would have liked it more if they showed the brother's reaction after knowing about the ML's dating.....the part where the seme was like "I like you, so goodbye" was really good(the angst)....the fact that the uke have been living off of lottery was funny(specially when the seme was like I don't believe you) Wanted more of the one shot but it was satisfactory....the name perfectly matched with the story...wanted to see more of the couple....it was kinda cool how the seme ended up entering the uke's room through window(just like in the childhood....that was the time the seme sneak out to uke's room to surprise him before going abroad...ended up falling asleep and saw uke masturbate with seme's name....) at the end.... specially since he proposed at that time(the night before the seme had told he had someone he loves and told I love you as a practice confess and the uke ended up getting hard....so he locked himself up).....saw a comment based on this story that in a lot of mangas it is seen that the uke notices seme's hand and height and the seme notices uke's skin and hair colour(and this is the only one where they said the reason)....loved that comment ngl....made me notice that fact

All the couples r bara....not a big fan of them....the stories aren't that bad but it's just the drawing ain't that beautiful and every couple is bara

The art is really beautiful and the story progression is not bad.....but both the story felt incomplete...like they never went in a relationship... In the first relationship they started as sex friends ...the seme had already proposed the uke about his feelings....yet at the end it felt their relationship didn't progress....even though the uke felt jealous and all but he was way too tsundere to agree to the fact which was just frustrating.... The second story was worse because the uke was bigger tsundere.....I mean it was like completely clear that the uke loved the seme....and that it wasn't one-sided for the seme....and they even had sex at the end yet the uke just Straight up rejected dating....that was way too weird

It was good.... The first story was fine....wanted more of them....would have loved it better if they had more scenes....the part where the seme ended up thinking that he was hated by the uke because he was being impatient and so ended up saying uke that they shouldn't meet for some time was good(and then the uke thought that the seme might hate him)....the part where the original seme(or second couple's seme) was gonna pat the uke(he was aiming for him) and the seme got really jealous was funny(and then the 2nd seme ended up patting the seme and the uke got really possessive lol) The second story was the original one....and it was great...I love the story of the couple...love how seme and uke interacts.....the part when the thought of the uke hating the seme was really good(the uke was avoiding him....and then the bartender of the bar uke and seme frequents to said jokingly what if the uke ends up hating the seme for the fact that the seme was being sooo pushy....he and the uke both were actually top...and so he was being pushy and asking the uke to bottom for him)...loved that part....and then when he was asking uke to not hate him, the face he had was awesome.... The third story was average.....it was kinda fast paced....not like it was great but it wasn't bad either ....it felt really messy like it was all over the place....was actually hoping there would be more angst specially after the uke called the seme irritating kinda(the seme once saw the uke being forced by a guy to a hotel....from then on he kept on being by his side but keeping on saying that it was to protect him....but in truth seme loved the uke...uke didn't know...he was also in love with the seme btw ...and when he felt like the seme was only being kind to him and thought the seme didn't love him as he was straight he told him he was irritating)

It was good The first story was good and I wanted more of it......loved how the seme helped uke to cure his trauma(uke was sexually assaulted which made him afraid of getting touched by other....as a result he pretended to be a top when he was a bottom and then the seme proposed him....loved how the seme was fine with being a bottom if the uke were to accept him).... didn't like how uke's trauma was cured altogether....would have kinda liked it more if it was more like the uke was only fine being touched by seme and no one else.... Second one was good....Hoped that the second story would actually be the part of the main series(Ijiwaru Shinai de Dakishimete) rather than this one... nonetheless liked it....was kinda hoping to see the seme suffer ngl....like the uke being angry with the seme and then the seme becoming desperate Third story was good...it was cute and interesting.....would have loved to see more of the couple....they were cute ngl....loved how the uke ended up enjoying singing again due to seme(the uke kinda ended up forgetting the feeling of happiness of singing as he was feeling suffocated with no privacy as a big idol...and then he met seme.....ended up hanging out with him privately and ended up enjoying singing again)....it was cute how the seme jokingly said that maybe the reason seme was enjoying singing again bcz of him and the uke was like don't be full of urself whereas that was the truth.....

It was fine There is three stories....both the first and third story is good....but 2nd one left me hanging...it was frustrating....the ending didn't feel good at all....the reason for 3 Star is only that.... The first story was really cute....I wanted to see more of them......I wanna see more of their interaction after being a couple.... 2nd one had the worst ending.... 3rd one was wholesome...loved the way it turned out and loved the couple