Crispy_Robin's manga / #married(16)

It was fine.... Very light read.....the whole story was about the seme and uke being horny and wanting to have sex with each other in a wholesome way.....really wanted to see them being mate with each other(they became mate but the process wasn't shown like seme biting the uke wasn't shown....they were like let's practice biting for the mating process and then the next moment they were mate)...

It was very good.... Really loved the side story when the uke was thinking the seme sleeping with their child is sooo cute....and also the part when the uke was like he ain't ever gonna give birth again but then ended up thinking he wouldn't mind doing it again when he saw seme being all excited after seeing the child......the part where the seme had bite mark all over his hand cz he didn't want to bite the omega was sooo good(the seme 's mom ended up drugging and putting both the seme and an omega in the same room and the omega went into heat and the seme went into rut....the mother then told the uke that and the uke went to the room and found seme lying in the floor with his hand covered in bite marks....seme's mom planned on making it stop before something bad happens and the omega ended up hiding in the bathroom....).....didn't like how the uke went to counseling without seme and ended up having someone else's account hand in his ass(the counseling was cz neither the seme nor the uke wanted to bottom.....and seme's mom was asking them to have heir soon....that was actually the condition as to y the seme's family gave a large sum of money as bethrotal gift)

It was bad....the premise was good....the execution was bad af....maybe because I had high hopes for it....but it just turned out to be bad.....needed more chapters more depth.....it just doesn't feel like the uke is in love with the seme at all.....even at the last chap uke was like seme captivated him with his sweet personality, care and sex and the moment he stops I will leave him.....he had that lackluster feelings....so it was annoying....also the seme had this possessive and obsessiveness which uke didn't have the idea(had a gist of the possessiveness though but uke thought the seme was all sweet and all).....and the worst part the seme had a gps tracker or something on uke(he knew uke's location all the time) but the uke had no idea ... Start and end:6th August 2024

It was very good... Start and end:18th Aug 2024

It was good ... Start and end:18th Aug 2024

It was average..... Kinda wanted the seme to show more affection toward the uke from the first couple.....it felt like somehow seme was just going out with uke for the sake of it.... besides didn't understand why the seme even pushed away the uke in the first place(he told the uke to never show his face) The second couple was annoying.....like for the first couple seme raping uke was annoying but atleast it was that the seme couldn't control himself....for the second one literally the seme was in complete control of himself and yet ended up SAing the uke....