Crispy_Robin's manga / #age gap(150)

It was very bad... The first story was something I hoped I didn't read(felt same during the re-read)...it just didn't make any sense.... literally no sense....some plots were completely unnecessary.....I just felt that uke loving his dad part was bad....and the way he said it to seme was worse....and then r8 after the uke coming to know about his dad's marriage then having sex with seme and then instantly thinking that he just adored his dad but fell for seme was the worst part(uke was literally crying when he had sex with the seme).....I honestly liked the part when the seme told the uke that he will see uke as his brother from now on and the uke was being conscious about it....but the uke's feeling just didn't make sense....would have loved that part without those previous part.... The second story felt really rushed since it was only 2 chaps.....I liked the story base....would have loved it more if the couple's relationship was a lil bit more slow paced.....it felt like their feelings were really rushed(especially the uke's)...

Honestly the story felt really weird and didn't make sense....I didn't like any of the uke in the story except the last one who was kinda ok....and all the one-shots left me hella confusing as to what I am even reading The main story felt really rushed....I kind of get the seme's love at first sight but did not understand the uke's feeling(altho it kinda felt understandable after the uke said that the seme is so bright and straightforward that he fell for him....but it's still feels weird)....I don't like uke's character at all tbh....I like tsundere it's true....but uke is the annoying type of tsundere.....also wanted to know what happened after uke's dad saw them kissing together....as he fainted if felt like he didn't know....but their(uke's family) previous was as of they knew(which didn't make sense either) The second story(which was an one-shot) honestly didn't make any sense....the uke felt like an animal or something....like sooo weird....I just don't know....he felt really weird...and the way their feelings grew was bad.... The third story would be something I would have liked if it was not an one shot.....we didn't like get any character introduction or anything.....the seme just proposed and they started having sex....that was all....we didn't even get to know how they fell in love or anything The fourth story(one shot) felt like it had no story at all....I had no idea what was going on....it was weird af.... The fifth(last) story(one shot) kinda made sense...and honestly was the best out of all the story.....but that one too felt weird...at first it felt as if the uke is a really kind guy...both the seme and the uke knew each other for a while and the uke let the seme have a sleepover in his house(as he is a kind guy and seme loved that part of him)...and they suddenly started to have sex r8 after the seme confessed....the uke didn't even replied......

The relationships formed really quickly....none of them actually made sense.... The first couple didn't make sense tbh....one moment the seme was like "are you fucking with me???" When the uke asked if the seme liked him....and the next moment the seme and the uke were in a relationship....that didn't make any sense at all ....the reason for uke's love also didn't make sense......the seme called him cute and he started following the seme....I just don't understand it at all.....it was pretty bad.....except when someone who loves seme came and altho what I expected didn't happen still that scene was good The second story was the same....the feelings just didn't make sense....the seme was like he won't give a name to someone he doesn't love....but the seme gave the uke name at the first moment....there was no sign of love at first sight or anything....it just didn't make sense The third story would have been great if it had more plot to it.....I just didn't understand the reason of uke's feeling....like he was completely in love with the other guy and out of no reason fell in love with the seme....like srsly....if only r8 after getting rejected the seme would have consoled him and their relation would then grow....then it would have been wayyy better tbh

It just didn't feel good.....I didn't like the way seme treats everyone tbh.....the prequel still make me mad(of how the feelings of uke was really rushed)....I wanted the seme to actually show some care for his frnds but it just didn't feel right.....

It had so many one shots which is why it's hard to rate it....╮(╯_╰)╭ I didn't like the first story at all....the seme had gap moe....he is popular as cool student whereas he actually likes chocolate a lot and is a crybaby.... honestly speaking I like gap moe....but the way seme was drawn just didn't suit it.....like everytime he cried or acted cute it felt horrible(-_- )ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳ The second story was not bad....I like relationship with teacher X Student.....but I just didn't understand some things....the teacher was a trainee and at his last day, the uke confessed to him and they got together (I think...I mean they had sex)....but then they just time leaped to 6 months and then the seme came as a permanent teacher....the uke told he was worried and why didn't the seme told about it to him before....that's the confusing part....I mean I just don't get it....didn't they start dating....so why would the uke act like that¯_( ͠° ͟ʖ °͠ )_/¯ The third story was cute....I wanted more of them.....I actually wanted to know how they started their relationship (it was an already built relationship)(TT) The fourth one didn't give off any feeling....would have loved it more if the love triangle had more to it tbh....it felt really bland and really rushed....would have loved it more if there were scenes from seme's POV too(=_=) The last story felt completely incomplete....like literally incomplete....all the incubus did was had sex with the uke and then he was like he wanted to do it more....and was like "is it love?"....he wanted to possess(not literally....make the uke his*) the uke but still the uke had no talk in it....uke's feeling wasn't even shown or anything....nothing developed between them either...it felt horrible (ﾉ°_o)ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳

Was good....It was cute but something felt off....like I wanted more drama and the seme's feeling developed a little too fast....it just felt like something was missing(idk what)

It was very good.... Liked the main story....that was really cute.....but loved the one shot more...I wanted more of that....would have been great if there was another story about them....also should have shown how the uke got his heart broken before(the story have love rash which appears Infront of someone u love....and well it would appear infront of the seme and seme didn't wanna trust anyone with love rash because apparently he was heartbroken in the past because of that but never was elaborated on it....it was an one shot after all).....the main couple was very good too....it was nice seeing how the uke was in love with the seme for long and would like always hear the seme talking about his love life.....kinda felt frustrating when the seme kept going back and forth in his thought whether he loved the uke or not .....like he thought what he felt for uke was love at one moment and the next he wasn't sure what it was(kinda understandable too since he stopped feeling love from age 8 when he got love rash and well started taking medicine which inhibit his feeling of love to surface.....and then it got all clear to him when he heard from uke's mom that he got the rash in the first place bcz of uke....and he had forgotten that b4)....really wanted to see their parents reaction to them dating(I wanted the parents to go something along the line we have always known u would be together.....like they have been childhood frnds and have hung out with each other like forever)

Stories felt rushed..... The first story wasn't bad...liked it but felt a little rushed.....hated the beginning when the uke was actually in a relationship with a married man....just didn't like that fact.....wanted the uke to confess his feelings rather than the seme.....and the story felt little bit messy.... The second story was cute but it was an one shot....wanted more of it....would have loved it more if it had more plot and scenes to it ... The third story felt completely incomplete....it didn't even felt like they were together

It was honestly cute....loved it....I loved it when the kid just told her friends that she have a daddy and a daddy and a mommy....loved how she stood up for the main couple(when one of her friend told that it was weird that she had two daddies)....I liked how they showed that she just resembled her mom.....I honestly didn't like the part where her mom just left her to their care and went off...but then it kinda made sense after knowing her backstory and also when she said she wasn't mother material......it felt ok....and didn't like how it showed as if their relationship wasn't still accepted by the seme's mom(even after so many years) and then the seme told like that he will talk with his mom one more time but it wasn't shown and the problem just got solved...that part just felt really incomplete

It was fine....the ending was unsatisfactory....felt really incomplete....I wanted them to be official....altho both of them love each other but I still wanted the uke not to be really roundabout and directly say yes....I specially wanted the last chapter be them lovey-dovey since the seme proposed the uke in the second last chapter and the uke was anyway in love with the seme....also kinda accepted (since the seme told that he will be in the cafe that he own and if the uke wants to go then he can and the uke went)....that's why didn't like the fact that they were still not official in the last chapter and there was no scene of them being lovey-dovey with each other