Crispy_Robin's manga / #Yakuza(16)

The side story was really good.....the series especially this one is really gruesome type which is why I don't like it much(ಠ︵ಠ)...the plot is good tho.....they showed kouki but no information on him(눈‸눈)( ･ั﹏･ั)

It was good...... Wanted to know why the hell did the seme time-travelled....like there was no reason or anything...it was a mystery all along....also would have loved it more if the uke had taken more time to call for the seme when he had fever as the seme literally forced the uke to do blow-job(after that the uke cried and had fever).....was kinda disappointed with the after math(the uke treated it like nothing....I kinda wanted the seme to apologize for it...if only this didn't happen it would have been better).....liked it how when seme saw uke's office mate and he was all polite and then the uke was like why don't u act politely with me too(he acts really rude most of the time with uke) and then the seme told that that wasn't the real him ...the real him is someone who is rude and not someone who is all polite (it just showed the seme was being himself infront of the uke and no one else)

It was good..... didn't really like the fact that the uke's unrequited love was the same guy with whom the uke from the main story was in love with(he is actually seme's brother).....actually wanted to know about seme's brothers feeling about uke(he and uke were sex friends.....uke loved him and don't know about his feeling)....there were some question left unanswered regarding seme's brother....and I wanted to know them....also wanted to know what the uke wanted to say to seme at the end(they had sex...the seme was sleeping and the uke was like tomorrow I will tell you something).... that felt pretty incomplete......overall liked the story....liked the fact how uke's dream changed(uke used to have nightmares regarding his last lover's death and it resulted him having insomnia.... then after falling in love with the seme he started having wet dreams about the seme)

It was very good..... Love how the seme is completely obsessed with the uke.....and the fact that the seme didn't end up raping the uke was really good(the uke was drunk and uke loves sweet things....the seme ended up putting whipped cream in his mouth and then they kissed...the seme was thinking of preparing uke but not do it .... couldn't prepare either since the uke fell asleep lolll)....seme's dad flirting with the uke was srsly funny and specially when the seme tied his dad up and was beating him lolll....really wanted them to see being a pair and then seme being all sad after biting the uke(the seme didn't bite the uke cz for seme the uke was really pretty and he didn't put mark on his neck cz it was too beautiful.....)....wanted them to be a pair

It was very good... Loved how dedicated the uke was lollll(he wanted to write an action manga but then the seme approached him with an offer to write bl manga....when he started writing the uke was rejected over and over by the seme....and then uke was like he doesn't have any experience or anything for him to write it.....and then they had sex for the uke to have experience).....also loved how the uke was afraid of height but was trying too hard to hide it....seme looking more like Yakuza than uke was funny(the uke was ex-yakuza but seme looked scary loll).....it was cute....the story's progression was good too....the moment the seme stood up for uke was good(there was another editor who was seme's senior in his ex-company wanted to recruit uke....it was a bigger company and also action related.....seemed like the seme was actually kinda afraid of him.....in the meeting the guy started ditching seme and the moment he ditched uke's work the seme poured liquid on him and was like u can say anything about me but u can't tell any bad thing about uke's work)

It was fine ..... Start and end:30th Apr 2024

It was fine.... Start and end:14th July 2024

It was fine.... Start and end:15th July 2024

It was good.... Start and end: 22nd july 2024