Crispy_Robin's manga / #Slavery(5)

It was good...... The first story was fine.....did not understand how the uke fell in love with the seme....like I felt the seme needed something like a redemption arc(ik it's small to have a redemption arc but still there could be a chapter regarding his redemption).....the uke felt a really demeanor type of person but somehow gave into the seme without any reason....which felt really weird.... The second story was very good....wanted more of it... It was honestly cute......the alien was super cute and loved how their relationship went....loved how the seme reacted when he came to know that he loved the uke and that he was ashamed to face the uke....would have loved it more if they had some more misunderstanding tbh

It was very good....the art was really great....the meaning of the tradition(the tradition is in the engagement one will give the other name and the other person will give them something special to them....the other will keep that forever) and when the uke got to know about the meaning(he was a slave in a caravan and when that caravan got attacked by bandit seme found him and saved him....seme gave him a name and instead uke gave seme an earring...uke didn't know about the tradition tho) it was great.....the part where the seme saved the uke was awesome.....and seme's brother is wayyy too handsome I want a separate story for him

It was great..... Loved it sooo much.....was a little sad how their first life ended.....wanted them to die while they were old ngl.....just kept on wondering why they didn't go to seme's village from the very start and so they didn't have to worry about foods and all but then again the uke was caught by the guard before and also then in the side story seeing how the uke(or seme) was thinking how now they don't need to be worry while doing couple like things made it

It was very good .... The first story was great......second one was good......