Crispy_Robin's manga / #Shounen ai(77)

It was appalling...... couldn't enjoy at all.....just didn't like how the story went....it would have been awesome if the seme would actually keep on helping the uke getting his love life in the game instead of doing what he did(he straight out told the uke that he loved him and also was not letting the uke to do what he want)....just hated the fact that the seme was choosing the options for the uke(they were in an otome type game in which they interacted like a game...for example if a girl asked the uke to go on a date the uke would get multiple options to choose from to interact with the girl...at that time whatever the uke say won't be heard by the girl....)the seme just interfered when the uke was choosing something and either chose for the uke or broke it(he rejected the girls=_=)....I honestly didn't like that at all....I actually wanted the seme to feel sad.....also wanted something like the seme thinking that he wanna give up on uke(or atleast try to)......just didn't like how straightforward he was and kept on doing it even after the uke was like avoiding him and all....also didn't like how the uke came to know about seme's feeling so soon and hated how he was being wishy-washy....I don't actually complain when a guy just keep saying that he is straight and that he can't love the other person cause he is a boy but this time when the seme was thinking that it made me really frustrated..... I really wanted the seme to atleast say to the uke that he will give up on him and the uke would feel really sad and all(specially when the uke thought it was really painful to love the seme when the uke was clearly avoiding the seme because the uke fell in love with him and he was being wishy-washy...) The seme thought that maybe confessing wasn't the right thing and he still didn't change his attitude....both of their character honestly pissed me off.....it was more worse that the uke was being really wishy-washy, rejecting the seme just because the seme was a boy and he was the so-called straight, still till the end he didn't have any sad moment....it was always the seme with painful feelings....just didn't like it at all(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻

It was good and cute.....would have loved it wayyy more if the second couple had more scenes and wish they had a spin-off The first couple was cute.....just didn't feel much attachment to it as if something was missing..... didn't like how the seme just went and kissed the uke in the first chap(I wanted it to be a unrequited love type of story) but didn't hate the way it turned out.....would have liked it more if it turned out like that but still it was good The second couple was really good.....y is it only one chapter???(ŏ﹏ŏ)...I want to see more of them(´;︵;`)

It was fine....would have loved it more if it had more chapters....hated the fact that's it's one shot(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻.....

It was really good.....I wanted more of them........damn why did it have to be one shot(｡•́︿•̀｡).....I want moreeeee.....

It was good..... wanted to see more of their highschool scenes (such as getting together....how they met etc).....it just felt it was missing something

It was good....wanted to see more of them after they went in a relationship.... curious to know what the uke's father would say...it was just really short.... didn't like the fact that the uke had wet dream right after the he heard the seme is gay(even though at that time the uke didn't love him....just felt weird)

It was average....the way they talked in like "yo type accent" was sooo bad.....just didn't like it.... The first story was good.....had problem reading it cause it was like in yo type accent.....but the story wasn't really bad except the fact that they weren't like completely together(although they did kiss and all but still like not official).... The second story was like completely incomplete....just hated it.....they not only didn't end up together but also there was no sign of them falling in love....just pure bad.... The third story was good tbh....liked the way it progressed.... although I thought the seme actually was in love with the uke's dad....but he wasn't, it was only pure respect as uke's dad was seme's professor....but overall it was good

Liked the main story and both the side story was just full of angst and incomplete.....so it was fine.... The main couple was really good.....I wanted more of them....I loved how it paced....I loved it how the seme's friend took it so casually and that was what made the uke open upto he seme (ule was afraid that people around the seme would ridicule him for being gay and being in love with his teacher....cause he had a similar experience when he was in a relationship with his friend and they were ridiculed for being gay.....they ended up separated with each other and his friend and ended up marrying someone else).....I actually wanted the seme to tell about the uke to his family..... I think it would have been awesome.... The second story felt really incomplete....they started as sex friends and I hoped to see more....ending just as they became sex friends felt really incomplete and bad to me....also the fact that the seme thinking that the uke was worse than straight guy(seme at first thought that the uke was straight....but when he got to know that the uke was in unrequited love with someone he thought that he was worse than straight guy as if the seme had no chance at all)and then going for uke was weird....I thought after saying that he would distance himself from the uke.... The third story was the worst....I wasn't ready for it.....they just ended up being separated and having their own family....one thing confused me in the story and that is that the uke saw a dream at the beginning when he and his friend told each other that they loved someone but it was a secret(showing that they didn't know that both of them loved each other) and then later on the seme told that the uke had pushed him away and asked why did then the uke contacted the seme(pointing that the seme confessed and the uke didn't accept or something like that....atleast pointing that the uke knew about the seme's love)....it's just didn't feel r8 as if there was something that was missing....hoped it would have been showed.....just felt confusing....and I was hoping that the seme being married would be a lie or the seme would have a bad relationship with his wife but nothing sort of that happened....so hated the fact that they had sex(I am not sure if they had but they did touch each other)

It was very good.....felt hooked up the whole time.... but I was see things from seme's POV too......it's not like there was nothing from seme's POV...but I wanted to see a chap which is based on how the seme fell in love with the uke, then what and why he did things ....things said from seme's mind....not from uke's POV....it would have been awesome if something like this were there....I also want more....I want to see a bonus of seme and uke after they got into a relationship

It was very good....loved it.....cute and heartwarming.....the art was really beautiful.....loved how the uke was all about being able to hide his emotions well(always using fake smile) and the seme was really blunt(he couldn't control himself and say whatever he have in mind without being able to control himself)....it just make them sound opposite.....would have actually liked it more if the seme became friends with uke's friend.....specially mob character A(in the extra one of the side characters broke the fourth wall and called himself mob character A....and the extra was from that friend's POV)...would have been nice seeing seme having friends and the misunderstanding to be cleared(the seme have an infamous reputation....his nickname is mad dog and he have a lots of rumour regarding violence....he also looks scary and have a scar which was actually given by his dog and the rumour goes as if that the seme got it from yakuza.....but those are not true..... because the seme looks scary others just picks fight with him).....wanted really bad to see the uke coming clean about himself and the seme to his friends.....it would have been great....I really liked seme and his dog's relationship....loved how seme saved the dog and as the dog was insecure he gave seme a scar while the seme was trying to care for him.....it was heart touching.....also the fact that the dog always bark and bite the seme everytime they meet is hilarious....wanted to see more of their moments and bonding....they are really cute