Oath Of Allegiance
Would have liked it way more if it was not an one-shot....it lacked depth in it....it was fine....but expected more...
Geboku-sama no Iu Toori
It was fine....the drawing wasn't the best....thought the masochist would be uke actually.....but turned out he was the seme (灬º‿º灬) .... actually liked how he was kinda sadistic too....a sadistic masochist....but it just felt like the seme's feeling was kinda rushed....would have actually liked to see things from seme's POV more......and then felt like the relationship between seme and the other vampire didn't really make much sense....the first time they met, it felt like they were really familiar with each other and also that the other vampire used to suck seme's blood but that wasn't the case(they only met once)....that part actually didn't make much sense
A Physical Education
It was average.... The seme's feeling felt really confusing from time to time....one moment he was like the uke obvio have someone else in his life and so I hate him and the next he is begging the uke.....would have really loved it if the seme actually tried to commit suicide and failed and then the uke regretted doing what he did(the seme actually sold papers to parents and the uke used that to blackmail seme into doing BDSM.....then they had this deal that if the seme would remember when they had met before this would all end....and well after it ended like three months later the uke ended up actually snitching and well the seme was so depressed that he was gonna commit suicide....didn't do it tho....)...but would have been better if he tried and didn't die and then the seme would actually know how obsessed the uke was for him....but well he never realized....it would have been perfect tho since like the seme craved attention a lot(his dad was a good judo player and the seme was like a child prodigy but despite that his dad was always strict on him and wouldn't praise him or give him attention.....then later when he went to high school he stopped becoming a prodigy and everyone started talking about and that made seme like depressed and he put up a wall while really craving attention)......didn't really like it when uke sent someone else in the bathroom instead of going(like they had a meeting seme bailed and went to a club....the uke made someone kidnap him and tied him naked in the bathroom.....the seme was Soo scared and was hoping uke would come and he is like his only life line....but then the uke ended up sending someone else..)..the seme was like really angry about it and was like he is not my lifeline.....but then when they met and the uke was like I am leaving the seme was begging him not to(the seme went one time without any appointment in uke's house but the one who answered the door bell was uke's dad and seme thought it was someone else.....so he got angry and didn't go to the appointment and then well when the seme was like u r meeting someone else the uke was like u r only my sex toy and nothing else....u don't get to feel those things).....didn't really like how the uke just kept on treating seme like shit but the seme was like I only get attention from him....would have been wayyyy better if seme saw uke's obsession Start and end:Apr 5
Sense of Loyalty