Crispy_Robin's manga / #Possessive(107)

It was fine....the story was kinda all over the place....like it kept on jumbling from uke's POV to seme's POV.....was confused when the uke was like the seme was being a pretend lover, lying and all(basically not trusting him).....and was sad when he was actually hoping that the uke, seme and uke's daughter would be family(looking forward to it) when the seme asked the uke to date him and was like I imagined dating you and all....well when we came to see things from seme's POV it was shown that seme was frivolous type of person and didn't really have interest in anyone but then again uke's thinking didn't make sense(not like uke knew seme's past or anything like that).....the kid was sooo cute....loved her...

It was fine.....the premise felt really interesting ....but idk it felt like something was missing.....sooo glad the uke got to know about the fact that the seme stalked him and I kinda wanted the uke to be like fine with that fact ...and also wanted the seme to like ask for uke's permission and stalk him after they got together....I mean it was obvious that the uke would distance himself from the seme after knowing that the seme literally stalks him(take picture and have set up a camera in his house).....but instead of the seme going to uke I would have kinda preferred the uke going to seme after realizing like he loves the seme a lot and would have been great if he said something along the line idc if u stalk me, I love u....

It was very good.....loved it.....I wanted to see more....specially possessiveness of the seme.... The way the uke realized that he was in love with the seme and then the seme thought that the uke was gonna go out with someone else so he tried to distance himself was good....loved it

It was bad.....The story was interesting but one shot....it seems to be like the uke accepted the seme while at the same time didn't accept it....had such a unclear ending....wish it wasn't one-shot(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻..... The ending was so unclear.....

It was good..... The premise and all was good.....really loved seme's possessiveness and obsessiveness.....would have been better if the love triangle wasn't there and all.....tho the worst part was when the uke didn't take the seme's hand(uke used to go out with seme's brother when seme was in abroad....seme's brother had a fiance and used to prioritize him over uke...he also lied to uke saying the seme got tired of uke and threw uke away when in truth the seme got adopted to another family....he did that so that he could make uke his mate.....it was hard for him to do it in his main household given they were elites and alpha X Alpha was the norm....and uke was ashamed of being an omega because everyone would say he was a waste.....he was born in an elite family of alpha as an omega.....so he was criticized a lot because of that.....and then seme came back to take uke and then uke overheard seme's brother and his fiance when the fiance told that the uke only was with uke because seme liked uke and it was seme's brother revenge against his brother who was seme....and that made uke really sad and all.....seme was with him at that time... ..uke decided to end things with seme's brother and then well seme's brother told uke that he wanted to make uke his own and that was a lie and he wanted to make uke his...at that time the seme came and said that seme's brother was coward and didn't have the strength to take uke away from his rotten family.....and the seme forwarded his hand and asked uke to take his hand.....the uke didn't take his hand and the seme was like "are you scared of me? I am sorry for making you scared" and went away ....the uke started crying and seme's brother was like that's how seme is.....and that uke should forget seme and the uke was like but seme was the only one who said he was happy that uke was an omega.....I mean if that was the case idk y he hesitated in the first place....and even then he was like did the seme really throw him away this time?....he was thinking all sorts of thinking and then finally was like to seme's brother that he was sorry and that he loved seme.....and ran after seme and well but he couldn't find seme ....)...it was annoying....I mean I don't understand y he refused the first time and why he took so long to run after seme ...like the moment he realized he did the wrong thing he should have ran after seme instead of being all wishy washy and worried and all

It was good......was kinda annoyed when the uke tried to run away even after seeing the seme holding back Soo much(the seme saw his fated pair and bit his hand trying to control himself..... uke's ex bf was seme's twin brother and bcz they were twin they had same fated partner....when the twin brother and the uke was dating he ended up meeting his fated partner while walking with uke and ended up losing to instinct and ran towards his fated partner....and later ended up getting together with him....that made uke decide that he will never date an alpha.....later seme asked uke to be his pretend partner and uke couldn't refuse because on uke's bday uke got drunk....mistook seme for his ex and ended up getting into heat and kinda forcing himself on seme ...and so as an apology he agreed to be seme's pretend partner....seme ended up falling in love with the uke and then told the uke that....after thinking for a while given his past he agreed to be with the seme and at that moment seme's twin appeared....he was with his partner and it turned out he was seme's destined partner too.....seme like bit his hand trying not to go to his destined partner....and in the hospital the uke tried to run away bcz he was afraid seme ending up choosing someone else ....and then on his way out he met the twin bro and ended up having a chat with him....where the twin was like seme must have loved uke a lot given it is really hard to stop ur instinct when meeting ur destined partner)....so ummm yh despite uke seeing how seme was trying so hard ....he still like tried to run away and finally realized how seme loved him so much after he spoke with the twin.....which kinda made me feel annoyed....

It was fine.... The story was very good tbh....but the drawing destroyed it .....like kinda liked the BDSM and all ....but because of the drawing couldn't enjoy it....not really much to say cz the drawing just ruined the experience

It was fine.... The first couple was good.....liked how the seme wanted to wait for the uke to be an adult before going after him but couldn't(the uke approached him and ended up letting his pheromones out....and also ended up proposing him).....kinda wanted to see uke's dad being mad at seme(they r co-workers.....both r idols and seme used to usually babysit uke cz of that....and later on when the uke had triplet siblings....it was noisy and all so the seme allowed the uke to be in his house....they were in the same building b4) The second story was bad....it was kinda annoying how the uke kept on saying no to the seme despite loving him....it's true he had separation anxiety disorder so he was afraid....but the constant thinking of he will leave me so I can't be with him despite the seme being persuasive made me feel kinda annoyed....besides at the end when the uke was like I was Soo happy that I felt like I could die when I was with u was the reason he ran from seme was honestly annoying..... The third story was good.....didn't really like how their was constant mention of blood being there with uke's urine(blood comes out along with his urine when he is stressed and he was stressed when he saw seme smiling with someone else)...... otherwise it was very good....after seeing the seme smiling with someone else, the uke confronted him by asking if he wanted to get neutered was funny loll ....it was also cute seeing the seme bought his co-worker with him to uke's workplace in order to make uke jealous but then the co worker ended up attacking uke lol...

It was fine.... The first one was bad....the seme drugged the uke and made uke secrete pheromones and then had sex and the uke felt guilty thinking the seme was forced to have sex with the uke cz of his pheromones......it felt annoying at the start when the uke was wishy-washy and was like I like him but I am old and if he leaves me I will regret it and all.....kinda made me angry at the uke and then we got to know about seme drugging uke which made if more annoying....the worst part is that the uke just forgave the seme.....like nothing.....and they started to be in a relationship..... The second couple was very good.....loved them in the previous one and even in this one....I really love how the seme is Soo possessive of the uke and the fact that for the uke the seme felt Soo handsome was such a good thing(in the previous story the uke always rejected the seme cz he wasn't good looking enough for him....but after falling for him the seme looked real handsome to the uke)....loved how both of them were so in love with each other and the uke getting jealous this time was very good..... didn't really like how the other guy just wanted to make his fiance jealous and all and so started hovering around the seme(tho yh the uke got jealous cz of it ...so it's good) The third story was fine.....despite the uke acting like he is in love with the seme it still feel like he ain't(maybe cz it felt like that in the main one.....the uke was older so he wanted the seme to be with someone younger.....and when he accepted the seme it felt like he didn't really love him....he cared more about his face than anything)....so couldn't get into it much....

It was good.... Loved how the seme couldn't just hold himself back when the uke let out his pheromones despite trying really hard(the seme didn't want to depend on the uke....he was having a hard time acting cz he was missing uke a lot and also he was doing two shows simultaneously so he was really busy to talk to uke......and when the uke got worried about the seme he ended up coming to the set and seme didn't want to depend on uke and wanted to handle all the stress alone....and told the uke to go....the uke let out pheromones to seduce seme)....the part where the seme didn't even notice the uke when he was saying gonna say hi was good(the seme was really tired and didn't know the uke was in set since the uke didn't tell him beforehand.....when the uke wanted to say hi and surprise seme the seme brush passed him and didn't even notice the uke.....shocked uke a lot and also seme's manager since they knew that the seme was obsessed with uke)