Crispy_Robin's manga / #Possessive(98)

It's a masterpiece.....Both the series are just awesome.... The story is really well made and good....and the art is beautiful af....I just want moreeee.....love this series(♡ω♡ ) ~♪....the last part where the uke was all shy after having sex was just super cute.....love this couple....wanted an extra of them being lovey-dovey ngl....I also want another story of their friends....the part where the main couple went in a date and the 2 of their friend(one is uke's friend and the other is seme's friend) tailing them just to make sure the date is going fine was awesome....I really want those two to be a couple....that would be cool

It was good.... The first story was fine....wanted more of them....would have loved it better if they had more scenes....the part where the seme ended up thinking that he was hated by the uke because he was being impatient and so ended up saying uke that they shouldn't meet for some time was good(and then the uke thought that the seme might hate him)....the part where the original seme(or second couple's seme) was gonna pat the uke(he was aiming for him) and the seme got really jealous was funny(and then the 2nd seme ended up patting the seme and the uke got really possessive lol) The second story was the original one....and it was great...I love the story of the couple...love how seme and uke interacts.....the part when the thought of the uke hating the seme was really good(the uke was avoiding him....and then the bartender of the bar uke and seme frequents to said jokingly what if the uke ends up hating the seme for the fact that the seme was being sooo pushy....he and the uke both were actually top...and so he was being pushy and asking the uke to bottom for him)...loved that part....and then when he was asking uke to not hate him, the face he had was awesome.... The third story was average.....it was kinda fast paced....not like it was great but it wasn't bad either ....it felt really messy like it was all over the place....was actually hoping there would be more angst specially after the uke called the seme irritating kinda(the seme once saw the uke being forced by a guy to a hotel....from then on he kept on being by his side but keeping on saying that it was to protect him....but in truth seme loved the uke...uke didn't know...he was also in love with the seme btw ...and when he felt like the seme was only being kind to him and thought the seme didn't love him as he was straight he told him he was irritating)

It was fine.....it's kinda weird that the seme was in love with the uke from middle school yet didn't remember his name(the seme and uke used to go to the same middle school....seme was always alone and no one used to talk to him...the uke did and they became friends.....the seme fell in love with the uke at that time....but later when they met again at high school the seme couldn't recognize the uke....even though the seme told that until he met uke he couldn't forget that guy he was in love with since middle school who was actually the uke......but still weirdly enough the seme actually neither recognized the uke nor remembered the name even though he was deeply in love with him)....the uke was always confused whether or not he loved the seme(although it wasn't annoying, it was just not my type).....also I want a spin off of the cousin's story(he was in love with the seme)

It was very good.....love the seme and uke's relationship....love how the seme did not want to hurt the uke and want to bind the uke with himself even though he loved the uke a lot(by binding it means they will form a contact and if they form it, it will be more like them living together dying together type of thing....if the seme were to die then the uke will die soon after and vice-versa.....and also the seme feeds on uke's blood...if they form the contact then of someone else feeds on uke's blood....uke will die)....he kept on asking the uke for so many times that whether the uke was sure about forming the contact which was really cute....also the scene of when the seme was in breeding period(it's a period of time which happen half a year.....only during that time contact can be formed......)and then the uke came in front of the seme all prepared to form the contact but the seme was saying the uke to go away even though it was really hard for him to control himself.....he was still doing it....so it was awesome....I really want more.....the possessiveness the seme started showing after they started being in a relationship is really good.....loved it

It was average.....didn't really like the uke's character......he was wayyy to dense and carefree....also stupid.....the art was kinda bad......didn't really know what the deal with the other guy was....like he suddenly showed up and then it wasn't even clear if he actually loved the uke or no....kinda liked the seme's character but that's it.....was kinda hoping for him to feel sad when the uke didn't remember their promise (uke promised the seme that he would celebrate his birthday every year and if he didn't fulfill the promise then he will marry the seme)....and didn't really understand the reason as to why the uke decided to actually spend seme's birthday with his friends (like he told the seme that he wanted to ask from that friend of his some recommendations of present....but it was odd as the friend didn't even know the seme)....like it would be fine if he were to ask few days prior but spending that day with his friend and asking for present's recommendation felt stupid to me

It was very bad....felt like a hentai...felt like no story whatsoever.....and everything was all over the place....kinda like the story telling was really bad....the art was bad...like overly drawn bara...kinda wished the friend would actually fuck uke too(or at least try to).... At least it would be a threesome (like the seme was fucking the uke and making the uke cut all ties with everyone else and then uke's friend came and saw that the seme was fucking uke and the seme was like uke is mine get out....but then the seme was like you don't wanna get out? Then stand here and watch how I fuck my brother)

It was very good.....The story was cute and dark at the same time....it was awesome....just loved how the story progressed and the dynamic between the characters(cried a bunch of times)....really loved the interactions between Ayumu and seme(like two peas in a pod)....loved how the seme didn't want Ayumu to end up like him so he was ready to give uke up(seme's mom was weak and so she was getting treated while seme's uncle adopted him mainly cz of seme's mom's asset.....seme was waiting for his mom and his uncle's family didn't really treat him well....after ayumu's mom died his uncle(uke) took him in....so the seme kinda thought they were in similar situation....but in contrast uke loved Ayumu and it was like a happy family which is opposite of what seme went through.....when the seme realized that he loved the uke he asked Ayumu if Ayumu would give him to seme....ayumu was like no....so the seme thought that he would give up uke for ayumu's sake....ayumu didn't love uke in that way tho).....wanted to see a spin off of the kids story(did ship Ayumu with his friend....it would be cool to see ngl especially how Ayumu was clever like seme and then his friend was easy going and simple...kinda like uke)....and wanted to see more of their family time

It was very bad... The first story was something I hoped I didn't read(felt same during the re-read)...it just didn't make any sense.... literally no sense....some plots were completely unnecessary.....I just felt that uke loving his dad part was bad....and the way he said it to seme was worse....and then r8 after the uke coming to know about his dad's marriage then having sex with seme and then instantly thinking that he just adored his dad but fell for seme was the worst part(uke was literally crying when he had sex with the seme).....I honestly liked the part when the seme told the uke that he will see uke as his brother from now on and the uke was being conscious about it....but the uke's feeling just didn't make sense....would have loved that part without those previous part.... The second story felt really rushed since it was only 2 chaps.....I liked the story base....would have loved it more if the couple's relationship was a lil bit more slow paced.....it felt like their feelings were really rushed(especially the uke's)...

It was good.....the fact that the uke's co-worker fell in love with him was really unnecessary.....just why simply make it love triangle (there was no need of it to advance the plot or seme -uke's relationship....like seme and uke already fell for each other and so there was just no need.....) Really wish for his co-worker to have a spin off.....liked how they showed things from seme's perspective in the bonus chap.....that was a cood addition(loved how he fell for uke at first sight but then when the uke said it was impossible he was all sulky and all ...also the plan of his to seduce the uke after they escape was cool)....really liked both seme and uke's mom(especially uke's)....the part where she lied to the uke and said that them not being together would kill them was cool(it was so that they wouldn't separate cz their merrage wasn't their wish.....they had to do it bcz of a curse that was in their village)