Crispy_Robin's manga / #Part -Timer(15)

It was fine....didn't really like how the uke hated omega(but then it kinda felt ok when his backstory was shown) but then seme's backstory kinda ruined it....like he was manipulative and I was fine with it but the fact that he would pair every omega uke was with and throw them away kinda infuriated me(that was the reason as to why uke hated omega....cz all of the omega he is been with left him and for him it felt like those omegas were using him as nothing but means of convenience) ....didn't like that at all.....would have been a great story if not for the way omegas were treated in the story

It was very good....loved how the seme was sooo serious (that it was funny..... especially after they got together seme's bluntness was funny af)....loved how the seme influenced the uke and helped him get good marks when the uke was always ditching classes and failing classes...really wanted to see how seme's parents would react when they would know about the uke and seme going out(seme's brother was kinda frivolous so they raised uke as a really serious person)

It was good......was really cute...loved the flow of the story.....loved how the uke saved(kinda...its not that deep) the seme and the seme saved(again not that deep) the uke.....like uke was afraid of eating with others....always alone....but then he met the seme and his brother and started enjoying eating with others....thay also made him outgoing in his work....and then when seme's mom died he started taking care of his brother and felt kinda empty....like he didn't wanna take care of his brother anymore and then when his brother was throwing a tantrum the seme was going to leave him behind....at that time uke came(he didn't know them at that time) and helped seme's brother his hand(seme kinda fell in love with the uke at that time)....... wanted story of tane(seme's bro)...he was really cute....felt that the extra was completely unnecessary....it showed as if tane loved the uke......would have loved it if he had a spin off

It was fine......I wanted to see the story from seme's POV too( ･ั﹏･ั).....wanted to know when he fell in love with the uke and the reason etc.....and also would have loved to see the seme and uke feeling rejected ....like when he came to have feelings about seme and at that time seme were to pull back(especially since the uke cried after the seme pushed the uke....the seme kinda force kissed uke and well the uke started crying and the seme felt guilty but much wasn't shown) or they would have some kinda misunderstanding(the seme did think the uke hated him....but since everything was from uke's POV...it didn't seem sad enough).....

It was very good.....loved it.....I wanted to see more....specially possessiveness of the seme.... The way the uke realized that he was in love with the seme and then the seme thought that the uke was gonna go out with someone else so he tried to distance himself was good....loved it

It was good... Start and end:6th march

It was great.....freaking cried a hells lot in the last chapter Start and end:May 14th 2024

It was very good... Start and end:8th July 2024

It was fine...I want moreee....like the damn premise is sooo good ....why the fuck is that shit an one shot.... Start and end:8th July 2024

It was very good .... Start and end:11th July 2024