Crispy_Robin's manga / #One shots(29)

Except the second story all the other stories were pretty good

The rape scenes weren't obvious....would have been better if it were....but the stories were good and the art is also beautiful

Only the first chap is from Hidoku Shinaide and the others are not....the part which is from Hidoku Shinaide is already in the main series (Go and watch it...it's better)

This one is just not that good....not my type

I wanted to read more about the first and third story (≧Д≦)....the fourth/last story kinda missed the depth of it...wanted to know the master's feeling and akira(seme's ex probably) and seme's backstory.... seemed blend

The drawing ain't my type....I wanted to see more of the first couple..... specifically them being a couple....the other stories were good but didn't like the fact that in case of 4th couple the uke had sex with the therapist (would have liked it better if just like 6th story the therapist would not have sex with the uke and say the uke to go to the therapist if the seme would reject him)

All the couples r bara....not a big fan of them....the stories aren't that bad but it's just the drawing ain't that beautiful and every couple is bara

Honestly the story felt really weird and didn't make sense....I didn't like any of the uke in the story except the last one who was kinda ok....and all the one-shots left me hella confusing as to what I am even reading The main story felt really rushed....I kind of get the seme's love at first sight but did not understand the uke's feeling(altho it kinda felt understandable after the uke said that the seme is so bright and straightforward that he fell for him....but it's still feels weird)....I don't like uke's character at all tbh....I like tsundere it's true....but uke is the annoying type of tsundere.....also wanted to know what happened after uke's dad saw them kissing together....as he fainted if felt like he didn't know....but their(uke's family) previous was as of they knew(which didn't make sense either) The second story(which was an one-shot) honestly didn't make any sense....the uke felt like an animal or something....like sooo weird....I just don't know....he felt really weird...and the way their feelings grew was bad.... The third story would be something I would have liked if it was not an one shot.....we didn't like get any character introduction or anything.....the seme just proposed and they started having sex....that was all....we didn't even get to know how they fell in love or anything The fourth story(one shot) felt like it had no story at all....I had no idea what was going on....it was weird af.... The fifth(last) story(one shot) kinda made sense...and honestly was the best out of all the story.....but that one too felt weird...at first it felt as if the uke is a really kind guy...both the seme and the uke knew each other for a while and the uke let the seme have a sleepover in his house(as he is a kind guy and seme loved that part of him)...and they suddenly started to have sex r8 after the seme confessed....the uke didn't even replied......

The relationships formed really quickly....none of them actually made sense.... The first couple didn't make sense tbh....one moment the seme was like "are you fucking with me???" When the uke asked if the seme liked him....and the next moment the seme and the uke were in a relationship....that didn't make any sense at all ....the reason for uke's love also didn't make sense......the seme called him cute and he started following the seme....I just don't understand it at all.....it was pretty bad.....except when someone who loves seme came and altho what I expected didn't happen still that scene was good The second story was the same....the feelings just didn't make sense....the seme was like he won't give a name to someone he doesn't love....but the seme gave the uke name at the first moment....there was no sign of love at first sight or anything....it just didn't make sense The third story would have been great if it had more plot to it.....I just didn't understand the reason of uke's feeling....like he was completely in love with the other guy and out of no reason fell in love with the seme....like srsly....if only r8 after getting rejected the seme would have consoled him and their relation would then grow....then it would have been wayyy better tbh

It had so many one shots which is why it's hard to rate it....╮(╯_╰)╭ I didn't like the first story at all....the seme had gap moe....he is popular as cool student whereas he actually likes chocolate a lot and is a crybaby.... honestly speaking I like gap moe....but the way seme was drawn just didn't suit it.....like everytime he cried or acted cute it felt horrible(-_- )ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳ The second story was not bad....I like relationship with teacher X Student.....but I just didn't understand some things....the teacher was a trainee and at his last day, the uke confessed to him and they got together (I think...I mean they had sex)....but then they just time leaped to 6 months and then the seme came as a permanent teacher....the uke told he was worried and why didn't the seme told about it to him before....that's the confusing part....I mean I just don't get it....didn't they start dating....so why would the uke act like that¯_( ͠° ͟ʖ °͠ )_/¯ The third story was cute....I wanted more of them.....I actually wanted to know how they started their relationship (it was an already built relationship)(TT) The fourth one didn't give off any feeling....would have loved it more if the love triangle had more to it tbh....it felt really bland and really rushed....would have loved it more if there were scenes from seme's POV too(=_=) The last story felt completely incomplete....like literally incomplete....all the incubus did was had sex with the uke and then he was like he wanted to do it more....and was like "is it love?"....he wanted to possess(not literally....make the uke his*) the uke but still the uke had no talk in it....uke's feeling wasn't even shown or anything....nothing developed between them either...it felt horrible (ﾉ°_o)ﾉ⌒┫ ┻ ┣ ┳