Crispy_Robin's manga / #One shot(59)

It was horrible.....all of the stories had open ending.... The first story was good....but the ending made no sense...we don't even know if they met let alone knowing if they got together....it was wayyyy too big of an open ending....hated it The second story was the same....there was even no claim about loving each other or anything.....it was as if they will remain friends forever.... Won't say much about the third story since it's actually a part of another story but then again the whole manga was horrible

It was average....the way they talked in like "yo type accent" was sooo bad.....just didn't like it.... The first story was good.....had problem reading it cause it was like in yo type accent.....but the story wasn't really bad except the fact that they weren't like completely together(although they did kiss and all but still like not official).... The second story was like completely incomplete....just hated it.....they not only didn't end up together but also there was no sign of them falling in love....just pure bad.... The third story was good tbh....liked the way it progressed.... although I thought the seme actually was in love with the uke's dad....but he wasn't, it was only pure respect as uke's dad was seme's professor....but overall it was good

It was bad.... The main story was very bad.....like the uke was literally annoying af.....just couldn't understand his feelings at all....altho we could read his thinking still it was just confusing.....like if he actually loves the seme or not.....and even after he finally came to the conclusion that he loves the seme and ended up dating....he literally found it disgusting when seme touched him....I just don't get it how....like he literally told it was disgusting and it was impossible when they were gonna do it....and he looked completely disgusted when the seme gave him blowjob...wtf man.....and literally was annoying af....even when he was saying the seme that he fell in love with the seme he was like it was seme's fault that his first love was a boy....like he was a damn homophobic.....it was just very bad The one shot was not that bad....it was more of an average one...felt kinda rushed.... didn't really like the uke much but didn't hate him either....kinda understood where he is coming from since he had a hard life and couldn't really trust in happiness....so I kinda understand his reasoning as to push the seme away....but it just kinda lacked depth.....like in depth past story of the uke and the seme would actually make it more likeable tbh

It was good.....it was great actually.....but then there is 5th chap.... It was a one shot.... The story was really bad ... Didn't make any sense..... Completely twisted likeb what the fuck was even that..... The main story was really cute and then there had to be that one.... Had no ending..... Was downright bad, wouldn't be wrong too call it horrible..... Well the main story was actually great..... Cute and wholesome actually..... The seme was actually a pervert and kinda stalker but it was still enjoyable.... Liked him for some reason..... Love seme's and uke's interaction..... Specially how seme is really honest and says whatever he wants (the fact that he directly says that he jerked off while thinking of uke is weird and funny at the same time).... Also loved how it showed that the seme always had eyes on the uke even though there was a misunderstanding (uke had helped seme in a train previously when seme was in middle school and uke was in high school at that time.... Seme had better sense of smell than others from childhood..... And he enrolled in uke's highschool and tried to find him through his smell.... And once uke's friend wore uke's tracksuit, resulting the seme misunderstanding from the smell that uke's friend was the one who has helped him.....)

It was good ....so glad that oono (uke's best friend who was in love with the uke) got a lover and also with the one I shipped him with....really wanted to see their series.....like the summary made me want it more...... honestly speaking didn't know he would be that much of a clutz(the uke of the second couple)....loved how the uke(of main cp) always visited seme's parents for asking permission from them(they r against gay relationship) and then how the seme is ready to cut ties with his family for the uke's sake....and also the last part where the seme proposed to the uke and asked if he would go to visit his parents was really awesome....I did want to see how their interaction went

It was fine The first story was average....kinda wanted to see seme get hurt more....didn't really enjoyed the rape....the drawing was bad ngl.... The second story was very good.....sad that it was an one shot...I really wanna see the seme locking the uke up in a room(he said that at the end)...would have loved to see it....

What the fuck was that......it was completely ewwwwwww......just ewwww

It was bad.....The story was interesting but one shot....it seems to be like the uke accepted the seme while at the same time didn't accept it....had such a unclear ending....wish it wasn't one-shot(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻..... The ending was so unclear.....

It was fine..... The first couple was fine..... didn't feel like their was any chemistry at all....like it's kinda hinted that the seme liked how uke smelled(It's a supernatural world where they were mutated from cat to cat person....and like pheromones play a big role kinda.....and well b4 uke and seme's meeting.....seme was shown to be sleeping in a bench where uke was feeding a cat and the seme's manager went to him and was like don't go wherever u want and not to sleep there....at that time the seme was like now the smell is gone....and that time uke was there....) but it wasn't told and the seme started to go after the uke out of nowhere(it felt like that). The second couple was fine ....didn't really felt like the uke loved the seme tbh....tho yh the uke was like into him from the start(like he would smell seme's pheromones and well also he did let his pheromones out for seme....but it's just he was like no the seme should be with someone younger....since the uke is an old guy but then he just agreed and all when the seme caught uke sniffing seme's jacket.....there just could have been more drama and the fact uke was only after seme cz of his face was kinda annoying) The third story was good ...I really wanted the seme to ignore uke tbh(the uke always wanted to go for handsome faces and the seme wasn't that handsome....uke released his pheromones for someone else and the seme ended up getting entangled and they ended up doing it.....later on the same would make uke meet handsome guys and when the uke would let out his pheromones the seme would have sex with the uke.....it was kinda annoying seeing the uke being all handsome handsome and the seme forcing the uke also felt annoying ....and then later the uke was Infront of them but actually ended up letting his pheromones thinking about the seme ....seme ended up getting angry about the fact that the uke was all after them bcz of their handsome face and despite the seme being so persistent uke didn't choose him......and then he ended up pulling uke in a room and was like u r still after them and all....and tried to force the uke.....and then the uke was like the pheromones was cz of u.....really wanted instead of seme pulling uke....he would rather ignore uke) The last one was in between fine and good....it was really weird.....but for some reason it felt fine.....like wtf story was it but still it's cool story.....really weird....the uke is seme's uncle and the uke is like dumb and is all about the seme......he is like obsessed with the seme after he was born and became dumb cz all he thought was about seme.....and the seme became possessive, manipulate and also obsessive with the uke.....weird

It was fine.... The first one was bad....the seme drugged the uke and made uke secrete pheromones and then had sex and the uke felt guilty thinking the seme was forced to have sex with the uke cz of his pheromones......it felt annoying at the start when the uke was wishy-washy and was like I like him but I am old and if he leaves me I will regret it and all.....kinda made me angry at the uke and then we got to know about seme drugging uke which made if more annoying....the worst part is that the uke just forgave the seme.....like nothing.....and they started to be in a relationship..... The second couple was very good.....loved them in the previous one and even in this one....I really love how the seme is Soo possessive of the uke and the fact that for the uke the seme felt Soo handsome was such a good thing(in the previous story the uke always rejected the seme cz he wasn't good looking enough for him....but after falling for him the seme looked real handsome to the uke)....loved how both of them were so in love with each other and the uke getting jealous this time was very good..... didn't really like how the other guy just wanted to make his fiance jealous and all and so started hovering around the seme(tho yh the uke got jealous cz of it ...so it's good) The third story was fine.....despite the uke acting like he is in love with the seme it still feel like he ain't(maybe cz it felt like that in the main one.....the uke was older so he wanted the seme to be with someone younger.....and when he accepted the seme it felt like he didn't really love him....he cared more about his face than anything)....so couldn't get into it much....