Crispy_Robin's manga / #One shot(59)

It was fine.....wanted drama in all of them but none had(there was potential to it) Didn't like the first story that much.....the uke's feeling felt really rushed....from the first till the moment they started dating, everything seemed to happen sooo fast....would have been better if it was a lil slow paced....liked the punishment plot but it felt it wasn't executed well...it felt the uke was like forced to like it and all....which felt weird.... The second story was really good....after the confession when the uke was avoiding the seme(the uke was sorting out all of his previous relationship)....the prob was solved really easily.....wanted a lil drama to go on.... The third story was really good....hate the fact that it was one shot.....would have loved to see more of it....

It was very good.... Liked the main story....that was really cute.....but loved the one shot more...I wanted more of that....would have been great if there was another story about them....also should have shown how the uke got his heart broken before(the story have love rash which appears Infront of someone u love....and well it would appear infront of the seme and seme didn't wanna trust anyone with love rash because apparently he was heartbroken in the past because of that but never was elaborated on it....it was an one shot after all).....the main couple was very good too....it was nice seeing how the uke was in love with the seme for long and would like always hear the seme talking about his love life.....kinda felt frustrating when the seme kept going back and forth in his thought whether he loved the uke or not .....like he thought what he felt for uke was love at one moment and the next he wasn't sure what it was(kinda understandable too since he stopped feeling love from age 8 when he got love rash and well started taking medicine which inhibit his feeling of love to surface.....and then it got all clear to him when he heard from uke's mom that he got the rash in the first place bcz of uke....and he had forgotten that b4)....really wanted to see their parents reaction to them dating(I wanted the parents to go something along the line we have always known u would be together.....like they have been childhood frnds and have hung out with each other like forever)

It was fine...

Would have liked it way more if it was not an one-shot....it lacked depth in it....it was fine....but expected more...

It was average.....don't like the fact that it had multiple stories The first story felt rushed tbh.....there was no exact reason of why they fell in love with each other....it just happened.....there was no depth.... The second story felt stupid but enjoyed it tbh....the way the uke were saying some idiotic things with the kids(about their dicks) felt really stupid to me.... The third story was cool....would have loved it if they had more scene......wanted them to actually break up and then the uke feeling bad about it and then reconciling again

It was fine...the story base was really good....would have loved it if it had more plots.... everything felt to rush....wanted to see some dramas going on between them

That was very good.....ngl one of the best

It was good.....I wanted more of the third story.... The first story was good....but it just felt as if something was missing....I wanted to know more about the teacher who fell in love with the uke.....it was confusing tbh....one moment it felt he loved him and the other moment it felt he proposed the uke only for the sake of the seme and uke to get together.....would have loved it if he had story of his own.... The second story was adorable...just didn't like the fact that uke didn't realize his feeling after the uke and seme got into fight and the uke seemed really sad and he was calling the seme stupid for not understanding anything(I thought for sure he was thinking about his feeling for the seme)....so it was just weird when the seme confessed to the uke and the seme was gonna kiss the uke and when the seme asked if he was gonna push him away instead of saying he love him too the uke was like he don't mind if it's seme.....it was as if that was the moment when the uke came to know about his feelings.... The story was the best....but the worst part is that it was an one-shot (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻.. ....I wanted to see more of them....I just liked the part when the uke(he might even be seme...since their position weren't shown) just put his hand forward and told the seme that he can arrest him for taking sneak photos of him(the uke took sneak photos of seme and seme was a cop)that part was hilarious...uke was just took cute....would have loved to see how they would turn out after being official (╥﹏╥)

It was fine....would have loved it more if it had more chapters....hated the fact that's it's one shot(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻.....

It was really good.....I wanted more of them........damn why did it have to be one shot(｡•́︿•̀｡).....I want moreeeee.....