Crispy_Robin's manga / #One shot(59)

Not a big fan of the drawing....they kinda feel like average type(it's an art book)

The story felt a bit rushed and lacked depth...I wanted more of the one shot story too....it was good but had to be an one shot(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫

The story is sooo good....I want to see the progress of the couple and wanted to see more of them.....why did it have to be one shot(ノ｀⌒´)ノ┫：・┻┻

Not a big fan of bara......the story was cute....would have loved more if it had more depth in it.....had the potential but it had to be an one shot(=_=)

It was cute and adorable....loved it♡(ӦｖӦ｡) .... The main story was just cute af....want more....and I also want more of the one shot....it was sooo adorable....and altho we know it but the couple didn't end up together....I hoped so much that they will show it to us...I want moree.....it's frustrating (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻

It was good The main story was cute......would have liked it more if they showed the brother's reaction after knowing about the ML's dating.....the part where the seme was like "I like you, so goodbye" was really good(the angst)....the fact that the uke have been living off of lottery was funny(specially when the seme was like I don't believe you) Wanted more of the one shot but it was satisfactory....the name perfectly matched with the story...wanted to see more of the couple....it was kinda cool how the seme ended up entering the uke's room through window(just like in the childhood....that was the time the seme sneak out to uke's room to surprise him before going abroad...ended up falling asleep and saw uke masturbate with seme's name....) at the end.... specially since he proposed at that time(the night before the seme had told he had someone he loves and told I love you as a practice confess and the uke ended up getting hard....so he locked himself up).....saw a comment based on this story that in a lot of mangas it is seen that the uke notices seme's hand and height and the seme notices uke's skin and hair colour(and this is the only one where they said the reason)....loved that comment ngl....made me notice that fact

Would prefer Todoroki X Midoriya tbh....

Honestly wanted more of it....the base of the story was really cool....if only it was longer and had more depth on it....

It was fine...would have loved it if it was part of the main story tbh....it just didn't have anything special in it

Idk it just didn't feel that good....would have loved it more if their was a main story to it and we could see how they got together....I just didn't like the fact that it was already established with no flashback or anything