Crispy_Robin's manga / #One shot(57)

The ending didn't make any sense

Wtf was that....the drawing was shit(눈‸눈) ....the story was double shit....(■-■)

The story felt really fast paced and rushed....

Love this one a lot ....want to see more of the main couple and also the secondary couple....would have loved to see the story of koido and hazumoto....liked the couple in the 5th chap(which was an one-shot) but that couple was incomplete (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻ ...... They didn't end up together while also end up together....

It's sooo cute.....

I too am a sadist just like the author huh???....hmmmm I enjoyed Maya getting nightmare(乁( •_• )ㄏ)....but well loved the part where Nemu was caressing Maya and his nightmare turned into sweet dream(≧▽≦)

The ending disappointed me......I knew it that the uke loves the seme but it's just why didn't at the end they were seen together...it was another open ending which I hate the most

It felt as if the uke still had the feelings for his editor and the ending kinda felt incomplete (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ.....wanted more of the one shot

The story was really good....I want more of it....why did it have to be one shot(ノ｀⌒´)ノ┫：・┻┻

The first story was cute(wanted more)...the theme of the second story was good and had a really good potential (it is the sypnosis) but it felt like it didn't have an end....it didn't feel as if the seme and the uke love each other.....they felt as if just sex-friends.....the third was adorable while it could've been portrayed in a more better way