Ijiwaru Shinai de Dakishimete
It was good.... The first story was fine....wanted more of them....would have loved it better if they had more scenes....the part where the seme ended up thinking that he was hated by the uke because he was being impatient and so ended up saying uke that they shouldn't meet for some time was good(and then the uke thought that the seme might hate him)....the part where the original seme(or second couple's seme) was gonna pat the uke(he was aiming for him) and the seme got really jealous was funny(and then the 2nd seme ended up patting the seme and the uke got really possessive lol) The second story was the original one....and it was great...I love the story of the couple...love how seme and uke interacts.....the part when the thought of the uke hating the seme was really good(the uke was avoiding him....and then the bartender of the bar uke and seme frequents to said jokingly what if the uke ends up hating the seme for the fact that the seme was being sooo pushy....he and the uke both were actually top...and so he was being pushy and asking the uke to bottom for him)...loved that part....and then when he was asking uke to not hate him, the face he had was awesome.... The third story was average.....it was kinda fast paced....not like it was great but it wasn't bad either ....it felt really messy like it was all over the place....was actually hoping there would be more angst specially after the uke called the seme irritating kinda(the seme once saw the uke being forced by a guy to a hotel....from then on he kept on being by his side but keeping on saying that it was to protect him....but in truth seme loved the uke...uke didn't know...he was also in love with the seme btw ...and when he felt like the seme was only being kind to him and thought the seme didn't love him as he was straight he told him he was irritating)
Kono Ore Ga Omae Nanka Suki Na Wakenai
It was fine.....it's kinda weird that the seme was in love with the uke from middle school yet didn't remember his name(the seme and uke used to go to the same middle school....seme was always alone and no one used to talk to him...the uke did and they became friends.....the seme fell in love with the uke at that time....but later when they met again at high school the seme couldn't recognize the uke....even though the seme told that until he met uke he couldn't forget that guy he was in love with since middle school who was actually the uke......but still weirdly enough the seme actually neither recognized the uke nor remembered the name even though he was deeply in love with him)....the uke was always confused whether or not he loved the seme(although it wasn't annoying, it was just not my type).....also I want a spin off of the cousin's story(he was in love with the seme)
Aruhi Hyouhenshita Shinyu Ni Kokuhakusa Remashita
It was average.....didn't really like the uke's character......he was wayyy to dense and carefree....also stupid.....the art was kinda bad......didn't really know what the deal with the other guy was....like he suddenly showed up and then it wasn't even clear if he actually loved the uke or no....kinda liked the seme's character but that's it.....was kinda hoping for him to feel sad when the uke didn't remember their promise (uke promised the seme that he would celebrate his birthday every year and if he didn't fulfill the promise then he will marry the seme)....and didn't really understand the reason as to why the uke decided to actually spend seme's birthday with his friends (like he told the seme that he wanted to ask from that friend of his some recommendations of present....but it was odd as the friend didn't even know the seme)....like it would be fine if he were to ask few days prior but spending that day with his friend and asking for present's recommendation felt stupid to me
Yanhomo Otouto ga Ani o Choukyou de SEX Chuudoku ni Shichaimashita
It was very bad....felt like a hentai...felt like no story whatsoever.....and everything was all over the place....kinda like the story telling was really bad....the art was bad...like overly drawn bara...kinda wished the friend would actually fuck uke too(or at least try to).... At least it would be a threesome (like the seme was fucking the uke and making the uke cut all ties with everyone else and then uke's friend came and saw that the seme was fucking uke and the seme was like uke is mine get out....but then the seme was like you don't wanna get out? Then stand here and watch how I fuck my brother)
Hinadori wa Shiokaze ni Madoromu
It was very good.....The story was cute and dark at the same time....it was awesome....just loved how the story progressed and the dynamic between the characters(cried a bunch of times)....really loved the interactions between Ayumu and seme(like two peas in a pod)....loved how the seme didn't want Ayumu to end up like him so he was ready to give uke up(seme's mom was weak and so she was getting treated while seme's uncle adopted him mainly cz of seme's mom's asset.....seme was waiting for his mom and his uncle's family didn't really treat him well....after ayumu's mom died his uncle(uke) took him in....so the seme kinda thought they were in similar situation....but in contrast uke loved Ayumu and it was like a happy family which is opposite of what seme went through.....when the seme realized that he loved the uke he asked Ayumu if Ayumu would give him to seme....ayumu was like no....so the seme thought that he would give up uke for ayumu's sake....ayumu didn't love uke in that way tho).....wanted to see a spin off of the kids story(did ship Ayumu with his friend....it would be cool to see ngl especially how Ayumu was clever like seme and then his friend was easy going and simple...kinda like uke)....and wanted to see more of their family time
Miscreants And Mayhem
Behind the Scenes(monologue)
It was good....was kinda disappointed with the ending....like I wanted to see wonho(2nd mc) to end up working and also him actually being the top.....overall it was fine.....didn't like the 2nd MC and 2nd ML at the start but they had their redemption arc so it was cool....both were sad and felt kinda like perfect for each other....2nd ML was a jerk(true) but since 2nd MC was a bigger jerk to the MC it was kinda fine(the 2nd MC and MC was in relationship with each other for 10 yrs and he treated MC like trash)....was kinda disappointed when the ML ended up having sex with the MC when MC was drunk (MC threw himself on ML but I still feel like he should have restrained himself)....but that aside it was good....enjoyed it
The Knight's Unfulfilled Dreams
It was fine.....it kinda felt incomplete....wished it was longer and they would complete some things....I wanted to see a reunion between uke and his brother (uke's brother was held captive for treason....he wasn't actually held captive, it was just a ploy of seme and uke's brother...I think....since it was a little bit confusing...... anyway uke didn't know a thing about this....he thought that the seme, the emperor was actually punishing uke's brother....his brother told uke that he had accept it and uke had ran away and went to seme after hearing that his brother was getting executioned which was a rumor seme created so that uke would come back to him.... And then finally their misunderstanding got cleared....both of them came to know that they loved each other.....and then I really hoped that the seme would tell uke where his brother was and I wanted to see the reunion....but the seme didn't tell the uke saying that the uke will run away after he knows his brother's whereabouts....though it shouldn't have been the case since the reason uke ran away was because he thought he had unrequited love for the seme but actually seme too loved the uke....)....and I also wanted an ending of seme with the other guy as he seemed like he fell in love with the uke(while in the runaway, the uke had saved a guy and was a sex friend with him for a month....the guy had fallen in love with the uke at that time)...
Kichiku, Encount
It was fine The first story was average....kinda wanted to see seme get hurt more....didn't really enjoyed the rape....the drawing was bad ngl.... The second story was very good.....sad that it was an one shot...I really wanna see the seme locking the uke up in a room(he said that at the end)...would have loved to see it....
Black Eagle in the Sahara: Alkil's Story