Crispy_Robin's manga / #NEET(2)

It was good The main story was cute......would have liked it more if they showed the brother's reaction after knowing about the ML's dating.....the part where the seme was like "I like you, so goodbye" was really good(the angst)....the fact that the uke have been living off of lottery was funny(specially when the seme was like I don't believe you) Wanted more of the one shot but it was satisfactory....the name perfectly matched with the story...wanted to see more of the couple....it was kinda cool how the seme ended up entering the uke's room through window(just like in the childhood....that was the time the seme sneak out to uke's room to surprise him before going abroad...ended up falling asleep and saw uke masturbate with seme's name....) at the end.... specially since he proposed at that time(the night before the seme had told he had someone he loves and told I love you as a practice confess and the uke ended up getting hard....so he locked himself up).....saw a comment based on this story that in a lot of mangas it is seen that the uke notices seme's hand and height and the seme notices uke's skin and hair colour(and this is the only one where they said the reason)....loved that comment ngl....made me notice that fact

It was fine...I want moreee....like the damn premise is sooo good ....why the fuck is that shit an one shot.... Start and end:8th July 2024