It was good.....it was great actually.....but then there is 5th chap.... It was a one shot.... The story was really bad ... Didn't make any sense..... Completely twisted likeb what the fuck was even that..... The main story was really cute and then there had to be that one.... Had no ending..... Was downright bad, wouldn't be wrong too call it horrible.....
Well the main story was actually great..... Cute and wholesome actually..... The seme was actually a pervert and kinda stalker but it was still enjoyable.... Liked him for some reason..... Love seme's and uke's interaction..... Specially how seme is really honest and says whatever he wants (the fact that he directly says that he jerked off while thinking of uke is weird and funny at the same time).... Also loved how it showed that the seme always had eyes on the uke even though there was a misunderstanding (uke had helped seme in a train previously when seme was in middle school and uke was in high school at that time.... Seme had better sense of smell than others from childhood..... And he enrolled in uke's highschool and tried to find him through his smell.... And once uke's friend wore uke's tracksuit, resulting the seme misunderstanding from the smell that uke's friend was the one who has helped him.....)
Kanchigai Tokidoki koi