Crispy_Robin's manga / #Love at first sight(12)

It was fine The first couple was good...it was wholesome....the seme was really cute....loved how at the end to bif farewell to the uke he took of his bunny head(he used to wear it so that others can't see his face and then after they started dating they had a fight as the seme wasn't really showing his face...the uke got angry and was like don't wear the head....later on they ended up not talking for a week.....after reconciling the seme took off his bunny head while bidding uke bye)... The second couple was bad(they didn't end up together)......wanted more of them...I wanted them to actually end up together and see more of them....it would be awesome to see them going out.......the basic story was good....would like it if one of them would realize he loves the other and then they would end up together it would be very good.... The third couple was fine....I wanted a lil drama for some reason.... probably bcz it was bcz they were childhood friends (maybe?)...it wasn't stated but I think they were....it would be awesome seeing some drama between them(especially the part the seme thought the uke didn't love him....as the seme would always be the one to initiate everything and also he was the one who proposed....he thought the uke might have been going out with the seme out of pity....wanted some angst at that moment.... unfortunately it resolved quickly.....well it was an one shot after all)....also wanted to see how they started going out

It was good.....the fact that the uke's co-worker fell in love with him was really unnecessary.....just why simply make it love triangle (there was no need of it to advance the plot or seme -uke's relationship....like seme and uke already fell for each other and so there was just no need.....) Really wish for his co-worker to have a spin off.....liked how they showed things from seme's perspective in the bonus chap.....that was a cood addition(loved how he fell for uke at first sight but then when the uke said it was impossible he was all sulky and all ...also the plan of his to seduce the uke after they escape was cool)....really liked both seme and uke's mom(especially uke's)....the part where she lied to the uke and said that them not being together would kill them was cool(it was so that they wouldn't separate cz their merrage wasn't their wish.....they had to do it bcz of a curse that was in their village)

It was good...it was understandable when the seme was being willful and hated the thought of the uke sleeping with someone else....and so having sex was understandable....but the fact that they had a deal that both the uke and the seme would cheer for each other and yet the seme acted willful everytime he saw the uke with his crush just made me a little angry(the seme was in love with the uke whereas the uke was in love with someone else....and so the seme proposed the uke an idea of one sided love alliance in which both of them will cheer for each other and the uke knew the fact that the seme was in love with him)......really wanted the seme to introduce the uke to his sister.....wanted to see her reaction(he told her he would tell her about uke later....and also their mother was no longer so the sister was kinda like his mother).....

It was very good.... Liked the main story....that was really cute.....but loved the one shot more...I wanted more of that....would have been great if there was another story about them....also should have shown how the uke got his heart broken before(the story have love rash which appears Infront of someone u love....and well it would appear infront of the seme and seme didn't wanna trust anyone with love rash because apparently he was heartbroken in the past because of that but never was elaborated on it....it was an one shot after all).....the main couple was very good too....it was nice seeing how the uke was in love with the seme for long and would like always hear the seme talking about his love life.....kinda felt frustrating when the seme kept going back and forth in his thought whether he loved the uke or not .....like he thought what he felt for uke was love at one moment and the next he wasn't sure what it was(kinda understandable too since he stopped feeling love from age 8 when he got love rash and well started taking medicine which inhibit his feeling of love to surface.....and then it got all clear to him when he heard from uke's mom that he got the rash in the first place bcz of uke....and he had forgotten that b4)....really wanted to see their parents reaction to them dating(I wanted the parents to go something along the line we have always known u would be together.....like they have been childhood frnds and have hung out with each other like forever)

It was very good..... Love how the seme is completely obsessed with the uke.....and the fact that the seme didn't end up raping the uke was really good(the uke was drunk and uke loves sweet things....the seme ended up putting whipped cream in his mouth and then they kissed...the seme was thinking of preparing uke but not do it .... couldn't prepare either since the uke fell asleep lolll)....seme's dad flirting with the uke was srsly funny and specially when the seme tied his dad up and was beating him lolll....really wanted them to see being a pair and then seme being all sad after biting the uke(the seme didn't bite the uke cz for seme the uke was really pretty and he didn't put mark on his neck cz it was too beautiful.....)....wanted them to be a pair

It was great.... Start:May 21st 2024 End:May 22nd 2024

It was very good ... Start:25th July 2024 End:26th July 2024

It was good ....didn't like the fact that the uke and the seme had been jerking each other off(actually the seme jerking the uke off) while not being in a relationship and the uke not confessing his feeling to the seme......

It was very good... Start and end:24th Aug 2024

Start:16th August 2024