Crispy_Robin's manga / #Gloomy(6)

It was good.....when uke was telling his secrets to the seme and was like he thought he was different and that wasn't acceptable (so he was hiding it from everyone else) the flashback seme had made it obvious that he was gay(I was like he is gay for sure)....was kinda adorable when we found out that the seme have been in love with the uke from junior high(they r in high school now) and also that he followed uke to the high school (can also kinda be considered as stalking)....kinda wanted to see a spin off of their classmates (like one guy asked seme if he could fill in for him....that guys frnd was like no...don't ask him...since seme looked Scary....I started shipping them at that time ngl)

It was good......was really cute...loved the flow of the story.....loved how the uke saved(kinda...its not that deep) the seme and the seme saved(again not that deep) the uke.....like uke was afraid of eating with others....always alone....but then he met the seme and his brother and started enjoying eating with others....thay also made him outgoing in his work....and then when seme's mom died he started taking care of his brother and felt kinda empty....like he didn't wanna take care of his brother anymore and then when his brother was throwing a tantrum the seme was going to leave him behind....at that time uke came(he didn't know them at that time) and helped seme's brother his hand(seme kinda fell in love with the uke at that time)....... wanted story of tane(seme's bro)...he was really cute....felt that the extra was completely unnecessary....it showed as if tane loved the uke......would have loved it if he had a spin off

It was very good....sooo cute....I wanted more of it....both the seme and the uke is just too cute.....loved it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡....the last part where the uke thought like he needed to exercise more was really funny....loved how the uke's life completely changed due to seme....and how they were really opposite.... The fact that the uke thought he don't hate the things that seme does even tho he would normally hate if someone else does that was really good

It was fine The first couple was good...it was wholesome....the seme was really cute....loved how at the end to bif farewell to the uke he took of his bunny head(he used to wear it so that others can't see his face and then after they started dating they had a fight as the seme wasn't really showing his face...the uke got angry and was like don't wear the head....later on they ended up not talking for a week.....after reconciling the seme took off his bunny head while bidding uke bye)... The second couple was bad(they didn't end up together)......wanted more of them...I wanted them to actually end up together and see more of them....it would be awesome to see them going out.......the basic story was good....would like it if one of them would realize he loves the other and then they would end up together it would be very good.... The third couple was fine....I wanted a lil drama for some reason.... probably bcz it was bcz they were childhood friends (maybe?)...it wasn't stated but I think they were....it would be awesome seeing some drama between them(especially the part the seme thought the uke didn't love him....as the seme would always be the one to initiate everything and also he was the one who proposed....he thought the uke might have been going out with the seme out of pity....wanted some angst at that moment.... unfortunately it resolved quickly.....well it was an one shot after all)....also wanted to see how they started going out

It was good..... The premise and all was good.....really loved seme's possessiveness and obsessiveness.....would have been better if the love triangle wasn't there and all.....tho the worst part was when the uke didn't take the seme's hand(uke used to go out with seme's brother when seme was in abroad....seme's brother had a fiance and used to prioritize him over uke...he also lied to uke saying the seme got tired of uke and threw uke away when in truth the seme got adopted to another family....he did that so that he could make uke his mate.....it was hard for him to do it in his main household given they were elites and alpha X Alpha was the norm....and uke was ashamed of being an omega because everyone would say he was a waste.....he was born in an elite family of alpha as an omega.....so he was criticized a lot because of that.....and then seme came back to take uke and then uke overheard seme's brother and his fiance when the fiance told that the uke only was with uke because seme liked uke and it was seme's brother revenge against his brother who was seme....and that made uke really sad and all.....seme was with him at that time... ..uke decided to end things with seme's brother and then well seme's brother told uke that he wanted to make uke his own and that was a lie and he wanted to make uke his...at that time the seme came and said that seme's brother was coward and didn't have the strength to take uke away from his rotten family.....and the seme forwarded his hand and asked uke to take his hand.....the uke didn't take his hand and the seme was like "are you scared of me? I am sorry for making you scared" and went away ....the uke started crying and seme's brother was like that's how seme is.....and that uke should forget seme and the uke was like but seme was the only one who said he was happy that uke was an omega.....I mean if that was the case idk y he hesitated in the first place....and even then he was like did the seme really throw him away this time?....he was thinking all sorts of thinking and then finally was like to seme's brother that he was sorry and that he loved seme.....and ran after seme and well but he couldn't find seme ....)...it was annoying....I mean I don't understand y he refused the first time and why he took so long to run after seme ...like the moment he realized he did the wrong thing he should have ran after seme instead of being all wishy washy and worried and all

It was very good.... Start and end:8th July 2024