Crispy_Robin's manga / #Comedy(74)

It was great....loved it a lotttt....when uke knew what the seme was saying with a mouthful of food it was soo funny(especially uke's frnd's reaction....)....the fact that the seme knew about uke piercing his ear in the same place as the seme was sooo cute....uke is just sooo cuteee....when the seme said that his type was someone who is like a dog and then later on when proposing to the uke he said that he couldn't help but finding the uke real cute as uke would come wagging his tail whenever he saw seme .....overall it was just cute and wholesome to the core

It was great....loved it....I kinda ship the two kids(hoping that they will end up together).....wanted to see their kids soooo bad(the uke is pregnant).....it was kinda sad how the seme's parents didn't contact him or anything (his family despised omegas and seme's mom was an omega....so his grandparent ended up separating them....sent his dad to overseas and threw out his mom....later they re-united with someone else's help....and even had a child...) Honestly would have been great if his mom and dad actually contacted him somehow....also kinda cool how haruto(seme was entrusted to look after him....) Turned out to be seme's brother and it was all seme's fathers plan(actually he asked seme's family's head butler to let seme take care of haruto and then the butler lied and told it was his grandfather's order....whereas his grandfather didn't know a thing)....their relationship is really cute and loved how it went.....it was funny seeing seme feel frustrated when riku and haruto was getting really well with shuu(riku is shuu and uke's child ....shuu was an elder in uke's family and just like seme's family uke's family too despised omegas....and so uke was locked cz he was a omega....shuu brought him out and raised him....teaching him various stuff and then later on one time when the uke was in heat they both did it....they planned on getting married.....shuu went overseas for making it happen.....while he was overseas his family lied and told the uke that shuu died and uke came to know he was pregnant not long after)

It is a masterpiece.....loved how in the start the uke was all jealous of the woman speaking with the seme(she was just a co-worker having work-related conversation with the seme....and then it was a first for the uke to feel jealous of anyone....besides the uke knew the seme was gay)....loved how the seme was all awkward and insecure in the relationship even though he was always so nonchalant and calm (it was his first time being in a relationship and always had casual relationship) and how the uke was so forward and also kinda insecure about their relationship (seme always had casual relationship with others and seme was uke's first male partner...so uke was insecure about not being good at it)...loved their conversation.......it was sooo good.....the part where the seme kicked nanami(seme's frnd from his hometown and someone who was aiming for uke....he took uke to have a drink with him....uke was dense and didn't realize that he was aiming for the uke and then seme was like I knew you were aiming for him....nanami was like ohhh so u want a threesome...and seme kicked him)

It was very good....loved how the seme was sooo serious (that it was funny..... especially after they got together seme's bluntness was funny af)....loved how the seme influenced the uke and helped him get good marks when the uke was always ditching classes and failing classes...really wanted to see how seme's parents would react when they would know about the uke and seme going out(seme's brother was kinda frivolous so they raised uke as a really serious person)

It was fine...the fact that both of them were fine with killing each other's feeling just for each other's sake was really good.....didn't really like how they were step brothers...other than that the story was good.....wanted to actually see the scene where they come out....would have loved it if it were on the extra....the part where the seme was giving uke couple things so that he could keep out the bugs were funny....

It was good The main story was cute......would have liked it more if they showed the brother's reaction after knowing about the ML's dating.....the part where the seme was like "I like you, so goodbye" was really good(the angst)....the fact that the uke have been living off of lottery was funny(specially when the seme was like I don't believe you) Wanted more of the one shot but it was satisfactory....the name perfectly matched with the story...wanted to see more of the couple....it was kinda cool how the seme ended up entering the uke's room through window(just like in the childhood....that was the time the seme sneak out to uke's room to surprise him before going abroad...ended up falling asleep and saw uke masturbate with seme's name....) at the end.... specially since he proposed at that time(the night before the seme had told he had someone he loves and told I love you as a practice confess and the uke ended up getting hard....so he locked himself up).....saw a comment based on this story that in a lot of mangas it is seen that the uke notices seme's hand and height and the seme notices uke's skin and hair colour(and this is the only one where they said the reason)....loved that comment ngl....made me notice that fact

It was fine....was really cute specially the yokai fox.....kinda weird how at first the uke was saying to the seme that does he remember him? He promised him that he would marry him(when they were children the seme saved uke from a demon....the seme is and exorcist....while saying the uke, the seme ended up getting poisoned from that demon....the uke nursed seme.....and then the seme promised to come back and take uke with him when they would meet again)....but then later at the last chap the uke finally realized he loved seme....also after the first chap the uke was thinking that he was helping seme for saving him(seme saved him again after they re-encountered each other....he had hurt his hand....and so the uke was following him saying he would become his hand....and uke was thinking that was the reason as to why he was travelling with the seme....and the thing about their childhood was kinda left off....).... honestly would have loved to see the uke be a demon ngl(the author wanted to make the uke a demon at first.....but then bcz he/she wanted them to be together ended up making the uke human..... and it ended up a demon residing in the uke instead of him being a demon.....)...loved how the seme gave up his spiritual power for uke's sake(they thought that the uke was a demon and he was possessing the body....the kid if the body had died so it wasn't force possession....and in order for the seme to be able to be get out from the body he had to have a great amount of spiritual power....and the seme gave all of his spiritual power to the uke....it turned out a demon was residing in his body and the uke wasn't actually a demon).....

It was very good.....really wholesome....liked how when the uke was saying that he wanted to have similarity with his parents(his dad was an Italian and mom was japanese....he went to Japan after hearing different stories about japan from his mom....he also wanted to have a japanese partner....his dad for her mom at first sight.....)the seme thought that uke wanted a bride(just like his dad) and ended up trying to distance himself because he was in love with the uke(also ended up kissing uke as in a warning so that uke don't meet up with him anymore).....liked how when the uke replied it felt like he was taking pity on seme(he was saying like "do what you want" as in saying like he had no other choice cz he couldn't reject seme.....but it was because of bad vocabulary instead he did love the seme....not out of pity)....the extra where the uke was jealous was sooo cute(the seme ended up breaking up with his GF at the start....it was kinda his fault and also the GF's fault....he was way too into work that he was ignoring her and in anger she ended up saying bad thing about farmers... retaliating he was also rude....uke knew it....after getting together with the uke he went there and apologized and she also apologized....uke was there and saw it and got really jealous)....was funny seeing him jealous ngl

It was very good....sooo cute....I wanted more of it....both the seme and the uke is just too cute.....loved it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡....the last part where the uke thought like he needed to exercise more was really funny....loved how the uke's life completely changed due to seme....and how they were really opposite.... The fact that the uke thought he don't hate the things that seme does even tho he would normally hate if someone else does that was really good

It was very good.....it was really cute....the uke was adorable and cute af.....the pacing was good.....would have loved to see uke's childhood friends reaction after knowing that about uke and seme's relationship.....also I want a spin off of the other guy's story(he was in love with the seme and then later on got himself a boyfriend after the uke and seme went in a relationship.... atleast they could have showed how his boyfriend looks)....loved how the uke felt a lot cold, unsociable type and found that he was actually awkward and clumsy type...the part where the uke hold the seme tight and said to everyone about his love for the seme was cool(seme opened up about being gay to his frnds and ended up being shunned and seme told this story to uke once)